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Strikingly: individual ethic odes: the bereft Tangible anger: mood most sharp: the heft Some adorn: leaf buds; flowers: the bloom From fortress: Lilies induce some: spare room Golden loom: hang like crimson: the hillside Seed furrow: drives elation pride: drill guide But Nature: requisite course time: her beauty Her paleness: bustle apathy; joy: inner sooty Whence arose: plain fanning faint: her perfume Unrifled bloom: rich vials scent: wings plume Genial earth: envy; prized cheeks: hour of birth Spring arose: hues views splendor: clean mirth
Written: March 31, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1205 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Kuhlmann is a poem of two phrases interspersed with three related monosyllabic stem- words(nouns, adjectives, etc)with an integral title. The label and form are derived from the baroque poet Qiorinus Kuhlmann's special sonnet form Love-kiss XLI/ Inspired by the poem KUHLMANN the form written by Poet: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/2/2023 10:28:00 AM
Simply beautiful.
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Date: 4/1/2023 10:18:00 AM
Interesting lines penned. Sara
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Date: 4/1/2023 6:54:00 AM
Your creative spirits shine my friend--venturing deep into this form. No doubt a winning poem.
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Date: 3/31/2023 9:43:00 PM
Always adept at new and difficult poetic forms, you are never tired of taking untrodden paths while most of us confine to the beaten tracks. Great entry ! All the Best dear friend....
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