I Can Not Remember

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The red flame burns brighter each day It luxuriates in the fall Angular sunlight beautiful Japanese Maple's pall But not true death but just a rest Resurrection come spring Today with a moisture coat and A heavy dew that clings I can't remember if I posted this one or not..

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Red Fiery

Date: 3/20/2016 8:05:00 AM

It flows so beautifully my dear poetess...I enjoyed reading this marvelous piece ...cheers !!! 7/7

Funom Makama

Date: 3/18/2016 11:32:00 AM

This is one of the bright part of a moody day as today for me. I am blessed reading this piece. Keep on writing lovely. cheers!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2016 11:38:00 AM

I am glad that this one was uplifting for you..Days are really hard for me now..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/15/2016 11:04:00 PM

Loved the imagery and flow of your poem, Sara. Lovely :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/15/2016 9:49:00 PM

A very easy-going read, that exalts autumn. The "moisture coat" was also a fine image. I would like to see the image you shared in person ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/15/2016 8:51:00 AM

Bright yet soft. Lovely, Sara. Peace young lady:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/15/2016 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel..I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment..Sara