I Can Hear Hope Whistling On By

I Can Hear Hope Whistling On By 

Lonesome train whistle blowing loudly tonight
memories of my youth and that amazing sound.
Images of my dog barking at the racing sight
of that train flying by shaking the ground.
O' how big that giant metal beast once seemed
with great men steering it by our poor home.
Dare I hope one day it be me, as I dreamed
big engine, black iron rails on which to roam.

Tracks leading into adventure far, far away
maybe robbers holding up a gold ladened train.
Reality, daydreams or inspiring child's play
imagination and hope some may dare call insane.

Iron wheels, they once moved my imaginative soul.
Now to regain that lost blessing, my great goal!

Robert J. Lindley
Sonnet

Note: that train just went by. My old mind jumped
aboard, took a seat and started writing!
Was truly great to be that poor kid again, holding
onto hope's eternal promise of a future not so damn
hard....
I can remember me looking at my dog, Buster and saying
--"Someday buster, some future day"!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:54 PM
nice flows.....keep the good work up
Shahein Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 7:31 AM
This is a great sonnet my friend , flows so well , beautiful and strong words , hugs / / :) dalia
Lindley Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 6:22 PM
Thanks guys for the great comments, too sick to post more today. Poem was written after an experience when I was young and heartbroken over my grandmother's death a few days before. Life's worst attribute is its ending......and leaving those we love ever so dearly behind.
Horsman Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 5:16 PM
I am a true steam locomotive man, and this wonderful sonnet as just made my day, Thanks Robert
Scars Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Robert, yet one more wonderful write. I am so happy I met you..Great job, as always...be blessed! :) -luloo *smiles*
Wigley Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:12 AM
If you never get to ride that train, keep on riding the dream, Robert. Woo Woooooo! A great write, and you people had far more impressive steamers than we did..... Regards, Viv
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