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I Can Be That Child Again

oh, how I loved my mother's garden where I would run and play all day and in the nearby forest explore with father. often, I would lay spread-eagle on the grass and sometimes I would creep among shaded trees climbing the branches to fathers horror where I would sit listening to the birds twitter later, I would pluck some wildflower blossoms and place them in a pickle jar for mother and she would exclaim happily- thank you and in our back yard I liked to watch the birds play in the bird bath father put there oh, I remember it all so clear but now, the garden is but a thorny field and mother and father have departed this realm and I ... I grew up and found out that life is cruel that happiness and delight are rare gems to find yet, in my moments of deep solitude I can be that child again ________________ June 3, 2021 Poetry/Verse/I Can Be That Child Again Copyright Protected, ID 06-1350-961-03 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (Jun 5) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/05/2021 First Place

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Date: 6/6/2021 6:56:00 PM
A sweet nostalgic write with a touch of melancholy. It sounds like you had a wonderful childhood, Constance! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Constance La France
Date: 6/6/2021 7:28:00 PM
Kim, thank you for the congrats and the comment, yes my childhood was wonderful, love _Constance
Date: 6/5/2021 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest with exquisite writing, my dear friend. Have a peaceful weekend.
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Date: 6/5/2021 7:20:00 AM
Las, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, peace _Constance
Date: 6/4/2021 3:00:00 AM
Wonderful, it was my grandma's garden, and I up in the old pear tree, you brought back some beautiful memories. Great poem.
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Date: 6/4/2021 10:22:00 AM
DM, thank for the compliment, and comment, oh yes so many wonderful memories in my childhood before the reality of the world touched me, peace _Constance
Date: 6/3/2021 9:04:00 PM
Exquisite writing, my friend. I think we all live for those rare times when we "can be that child again." I cherish the time I spent with your poem.
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Date: 6/4/2021 10:23:00 AM
Milt, thank you for the compliment and the lovely comment, peace _Constance
Date: 6/3/2021 7:32:00 PM
Oh yes…we must embrace that inner child who is our true self. Loved your playful memories. Love, SuZ
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Date: 6/4/2021 10:23:00 AM
SuZ, thank you for the comment and compliment, love _Constance
Date: 6/3/2021 7:14:00 PM
_Constance, Wonderful all those branches climbed in a life. Hold on to those gems. -Richard
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Date: 6/4/2021 10:24:00 AM
Richard, thank you for the lovely comment, peace _Constance
Date: 6/3/2021 4:56:00 PM
Ah yes. The best of times and the worst of times. Childhood is a million dollar experience I wouldn't pay a nickle to repeat. But your words are touching and beautiful. Well penned. Have a great day.
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Date: 6/4/2021 10:26:00 AM
David, thank you for the compliment, my childhood was beautiful until it wasn't but the beautiful parts I keep pressed to my heart, and I realize that many kids have no beautiful parts ever in the their childhoods, peace _Constance

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