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I Came, I Saw

I came, I saw ... In Bar From far I look She took My heart Apart The bling A ring Married Buried The thought I fought In trance No chance Not mine Opine Sad pup Gave up Still think Of link Again In pain No cheat We meet A wink One drink No more I swore Cut loose She use Gave in Her win Elate We mate The cost I lost ……………… she conquered

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Date: 8/28/2021 7:08:00 PM
Great imagery , Sean, congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle contest. Hugs Eve
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Sean Kibble
Date: 8/28/2021 7:50:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/28/2021 10:00:00 AM
"I came I came... she conquered"!! Good one!!! Congrats in the contest.
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Sean Kibble
Date: 8/28/2021 7:50:00 PM
Thank you

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