I Came, I Saw

I came, I saw ...


In Bar
From far

I look
She took

My heart
Apart

The bling
A ring

Married
Buried

The thought
I fought

In trance
No chance

Not mine
Opine

Sad pup
Gave up

Still think
Of link

Again
In pain

No cheat
We meet

A wink
One drink

No more
I swore

Cut loose
She use

Gave in 
Her win

Elate
We mate

The cost
I lost

……………… she conquered
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Roper Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:08 PM
Great imagery , Sean, congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle contest. Hugs Eve
Kibble Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:50 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:00 AM
"I came I came... she conquered"!! Good one!!! Congrats in the contest.
Kibble Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:50 PM
Thank you
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