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I C E : ODE TO SELF

[Self Esteem Ode Sponsor : Crystol Woods Date submitted : 22/5/25]
I C E : Ode to Self few Hearts can fancy dress their nakedness in icicle Presence fewer minds will slip into cemetery’s dusk soul appears, no hectic heady harkening glancing what is needed or already seeded I n s I g h t checks wisdom, no cerebral chancing silence answers chaos, no questions faith penetratingly poetic deep silver edged sheath transmuting bleeps action cannot dreamscape when carriaged C o u R a g e is coloured cloak comely mission determines doubtless devic discipline human evolution her equanimous earthy core smoothly dictates exalted memory raw as fear appears, a whispering whimpering head she chooses Laurel-Hardy jovial jokes instead body-mind will momentarily magically move illusive graped grace to forth face, zero haste she grooves all goals with hidden ace defining own pinky pace, trusting Trinity true gives mental and psychic lucidity a hue E equals E n d u R a n c e, persevering stormy hardships severe ever near, trials for miles trancing transforms grovelling groundless guile otherworldly veneer belies frothy fortitude rhombus robust rectitude, steady steely solitude Sun, opposite pole Lover adoringly advises she embraces its Fire over chastising eyes melting hade Himalayan I C E to glide embalmed, charmed warmed waters calmed

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Date: 5/26/2025 9:10:00 AM
Dear Ghairo, your poetry on self-discovery, perseverance, and inner strength is fantastic. You weigh candor and bravery to be oneself as she navigates human complexity. The topic covers personal development, faith, and staying optimistic in turmoil and hardship. I just love it, and this is a fave. The voice in my poem is not mine, why, smiles?
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 5/26/2025 9:38:00 AM
ThkU Sotto. I enjoy your accurate perceptions & appreciate your time 4 comment. I thought it sounded AI- ish. Would love to hear you read your poems yourself, so I asked, smiles.
Date: 5/25/2025 7:08:00 PM
"rhombus robust rectitude, steady steely solitude" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 5/25/2025 8:54:00 PM
ThkU so much for read & comment, Christuraj. Blessings x.

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