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Ink's I Breathe Contest ~ November 18, 2024

I breathe silence in the hush of a lavender sky morning and in a sweet symphony I hear as dark becomes day. There’s a melody that delights me as the world grows light, where once shadows embraced the murk of night. In these moments of sapid solitude, I find an inner calm soothing my spirit as the world around me slumbers. It's as near to any meditative mood that I ever tread when waking from bed to herald aurora before sunrise. In the realm of 'just before dawn,' songbirds join in an avian chorus that I think is meant only for me. Their trills are like placid waves floating in my mind that guide my thoughts across eternal ripples of a sea. You see, I feel as if no one else exists in my castle tower at the hour I live in these moments of tranquility. I find silence holds sway to keep woeful worries at bay. At the window, I notice mundane things here and there... how the slight breeze makes moss flutter through trees as if it's weaving its fingers through someone's gray hair. Often, I try to remember what I should surely write about, but being afraid I'll miss one minute of nature's dance, I remain at the window breathing in all the quiet I can hold with the promise of dawn as the sky is brushed amber gold. Softly now, light glows in the East in pale shades of blue. I sigh, knowing the transience of this hushed time will not last and inhale every bit of stillness I can before it slips away. In the midst of each early morning hue, I savor every sight. Each breath I take in that sweet silent hour brings me peace in the taciturn time when appears in my vision, morn's first light.

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Date: 11/30/2024 1:49:00 PM
Wow you are such a huge talent Lin! The opening line grab the senses and keep us engaged! This is amazing! Congratulations on your top win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2024 1:55:00 PM
You’re such a positive minded person, Karen. I appreciate every kind comment you offer my poetry. ;-)
Date: 11/29/2024 9:54:00 AM
Oh, Lin--You just write so beautifully. From your "hush of a lavender sky morning..." to the last stanza, your words and thoughts are simply magical. Congratulations!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2024 3:42:00 AM
What lovely thoughts you've written about my poem, Ann. Thank you, and I see your poem deserves accolades, too. I will read it and share my thoughts with you.
Date: 11/29/2024 1:46:00 AM
Dear lin, i keep reading this, over and over again and i cant help but be in awe, especially of the opening and your choice which is “ silence” as that resonates with me and i love your use of such fragrant words to express here along with other poetic techniques. Sumptuous write that flows with so much depth! Every word woven in this speaks volumes! Thank you for writing and for sharing! Congratulations on your well deserved first place. Sending you light
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2024 3:38:00 AM
To read a poem more than once is quite an honor in my eyes, so thank you for having done so, Ink. Your reviews are always poetic and appreciated. Thank you ever so much for finding my lines worthy of a placement in your contest.
Date: 11/18/2024 4:15:00 PM
i believe this breath will blow away the competition....masterfully done Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/21/2024 8:48:00 PM
Thanks very much, John.
Date: 11/18/2024 2:29:00 PM
Excellent poem! A favorite! Have a nice day ~ AA
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Date: 11/21/2024 8:48:00 PM
Thanks, AA.
Date: 11/18/2024 9:53:00 AM
Nice picture of morning solitude. Solitude and sadness evoke the most poetic vibes.
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Date: 11/21/2024 8:48:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 11/18/2024 6:27:00 AM
- What a wonderfully quiet morning, Lin ... I breathe the first snow this morning - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2024 7:04:00 AM
I haven't breathed snow in 13 years, Anne-Lise. I always loved the first snowfall of the season. Memories serve to feel the chill, yet to go outside and have the snowflakes ever so gently fall upon my face. Good memories. Thanks, sweet friend.
Date: 11/18/2024 6:20:00 AM
Lin what tender moments of visual beauty and tranquility you share in your morning Poetry, escaping from the world into a realm of relaxation and comforting reality. To get lost into its visual pleasantry. Love reading about your morning escape. Thanks for sharing Lin, enjoy the rest of your day...
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Date: 11/18/2024 7:02:00 AM
It's always the most beautiful time of day when everything around me lies still and quiet. Thanks so very kindly for your kind words, Michael.
Date: 11/18/2024 6:06:00 AM
I can just picture that early morning scene Lin when the whole world is hushed, apart from the dawn chorus, I know it's your favourite time of day, it's mine too. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 11/19/2024 2:56:00 AM
Update, first snow has arrived, I can watch from my window.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2024 7:01:00 AM
Thank you ever so much for seeing what I tried to express in these lines, Tom. I'm often at my window, overlooking the trees and garden while the early morning songbirds sing.

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