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Ink's I Breathe Contest ~ November 18, 2024

I Breathe Silence

I breathe silence in the hush of a lavender sky morning
and in a sweet symphony I hear as dark becomes day.
There’s a melody that delights me as the world grows light,
where once shadows embraced the murk of night.
In these moments of sapid solitude, I find an inner calm
soothing my spirit as the world around me slumbers.
It's as near to any meditative mood that I ever tread
when waking from bed to herald aurora before sunrise.

In the realm of 'just before dawn,' songbirds join in
an avian chorus that I think is meant only for me.
Their trills are like placid waves floating in my mind
that guide my thoughts across eternal ripples of a sea.
You see, I feel as if no one else exists in my castle tower
at the hour I live in these moments of tranquility. 
I find silence holds sway to keep woeful worries at bay.

At the window, I notice mundane things here and there...
how the slight breeze makes moss flutter through trees 
as if it's weaving its fingers through someone's gray hair.
Often, I try to remember what I should surely write about,
but being afraid I'll miss one minute of nature's dance,
I remain at the window breathing in all the quiet I can hold
with the promise of dawn as the sky is brushed amber gold.

Softly now, light glows in the East in pale shades of blue.
I sigh, knowing the transience of this hushed time will not last
and inhale every bit of stillness I can before it slips away.
In the midst of each early morning hue, I savor every sight.
Each breath I take in that sweet silent hour brings me peace
in the taciturn time when appears in my vision, morn's first light.
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Jones Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Wow you are such a huge talent Lin! The opening line grab the senses and keep us engaged! This is amazing! Congratulations on your top win!
Lane Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 1:55 PM
You’re such a positive minded person, Karen. I appreciate every kind comment you offer my poetry. ;-)
Peck Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Oh, Lin--You just write so beautifully. From your "hush of a lavender sky morning..." to the last stanza, your words and thoughts are simply magical. Congratulations!
Lane Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 3:42 AM
What lovely thoughts you've written about my poem, Ann. Thank you, and I see your poem deserves accolades, too. I will read it and share my thoughts with you.
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 1:46 AM
Dear lin, i keep reading this, over and over again and i cant help but be in awe, especially of the opening and your choice which is “ silence” as that resonates with me and i love your use of such fragrant words to express here along with other poetic techniques. Sumptuous write that flows with so much depth! Every word woven in this speaks volumes! Thank you for writing and for sharing! Congratulations on your well deserved first place. Sending you light
Lane Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 3:38 AM
To read a poem more than once is quite an honor in my eyes, so thank you for having done so, Ink. Your reviews are always poetic and appreciated. Thank you ever so much for finding my lines worthy of a placement in your contest.
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 4:15 PM
i believe this breath will blow away the competition....masterfully done Lin.
Lane Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 8:48 PM
Thanks very much, John.
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Excellent poem! A favorite! Have a nice day ~ AA
Lane Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 8:48 PM
Thanks, AA.
Narain Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Nice picture of morning solitude. Solitude and sadness evoke the most poetic vibes.
Lane Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 8:48 PM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 6:27 AM
- What a wonderfully quiet morning, Lin ... I breathe the first snow this morning - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 7:04 AM
I haven't breathed snow in 13 years, Anne-Lise. I always loved the first snowfall of the season. Memories serve to feel the chill, yet to go outside and have the snowflakes ever so gently fall upon my face. Good memories. Thanks, sweet friend.
Tor Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 6:20 AM
Lin what tender moments of visual beauty and tranquility you share in your morning Poetry, escaping from the world into a realm of relaxation and comforting reality. To get lost into its visual pleasantry. Love reading about your morning escape. Thanks for sharing Lin, enjoy the rest of your day...
Lane Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 7:02 AM
It's always the most beautiful time of day when everything around me lies still and quiet. Thanks so very kindly for your kind words, Michael.
Cunningham Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 6:06 AM
I can just picture that early morning scene Lin when the whole world is hushed, apart from the dawn chorus, I know it's your favourite time of day, it's mine too. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 2:56 AM
Update, first snow has arrived, I can watch from my window.
Lane Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Thank you ever so much for seeing what I tried to express in these lines, Tom. I'm often at my window, overlooking the trees and garden while the early morning songbirds sing.
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