Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

I Breathe Life

I breathe life,
from all the strife.
Many words have cut like a sharp knife,
this was real and not a fairylife.
God has shown me the way,
each night and each day.
I will talk to Him as I pray, 
His love will make me happy and not gray.
Now I will give joy,
to every girl and boy.
I breathe life of love,
because it comes from above.

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Joseph P. DiMino November 17, 2024 at 7:23 AM "I breathe life of love, because it comes from above." -- Above! Within! No shortage to one who is open to receive. Lovely poem. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick November 17, 2024 at 3:22 AM I enjoyed reading your faith-based work this morning. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K

I Am Anaya November 16, 2024 at 5:18 PM Uplifting, Paula. God is good. Ty for sharing your love! B0l

Michael Tor November 16, 2024 at 1:38 PM Such lovely joy you share Paula God bless you...

Ann Peck November 16, 2024 at 12:29 PM That's a lovely poem, Paula. Good luck in contest!

Karen Jones November 16, 2024 at 10:54 AM A positive energy and love flows from your heart to your pen to us reading! Thanks for that Paula!

Phyllis Babcock November 16, 2024 at 9:04 AM Wonderful poem on spreading love. Nicely written. Have a wonderful day. love phyl

Anne E Sangster - K November 15, 2024 at 2:31 PM Simply beautiful Paula and a joy to read :-) And thank you again for soupmailing me about the rainbow bridge. Hugs Anne xox Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:47 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you found my "I Breathe Life" write to be Simply beautiful. SoupMail, no problem. Take Care With Hugs.... Have a very blessed day writing away.............

Jay Narain November 15, 2024 at 11:52 AM Nice short and meaningful poem. GL in contest. Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:45 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support and for your GL. Glad you found my "I Breathe Life" write to be Nice short and meaningful poem. Have a very blessed day writing away.............

Silent One November 15, 2024 at 10:28 AM Wonderful poem and idea for this contest my dear friend.. It does all come from above.. All the best.. Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:43 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support and for All the best. Glad you enjoyed reading my "I Breathe Life" write. Yes, it all comes from above...  Have a very blessed day writing away.........

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2024 at 8:54 AM Short and sweet. And very relatable Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:41 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you found my "I Breathe Life" write to be Short and sweet. And very relatable. It was fun to bring to life... Have a very blessed day writing away.............

Tom Cunningham November 15, 2024 at 7:21 AM A very uplifting verse Paula, following in his ways will lead to salvation. Tom Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:40 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you found my "I Breathe Life" write to be A very uplifting verse. You are so right when you say, "following in his ways will lead to salvation."  Have a very blessed day writing away.............

Jennifer Proxenos November 15, 2024 at 7:20 AM Hi Paula, Such a cute faith filled poem and beautifully rhymed. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:38 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you enjoyed reading my "I Breathe Life" write. I enjoyed writing this one. Hugs... Have a very blessed day writing away..........

Anitha Jayasankar November 15, 2024 at 6:43 AM Such a beautiful rhyme dear Paula... "I breathe life of love", liked this. Hugs... ~ Ani Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:36 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you found my "I Breathe Life" write to be a beautiful rhyme. Hugs..  Have a very blessed day writing away.............

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 14, 2024 at 6:02 PM This poem is very beautiful and uplifting, Paula. It is in my faves. Kindest regards. Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:35 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you found my "I Breathe Life" write to be very beautiful and uplifting. I see FAV??? Thanks, you put a smile on my heart...  Have a very blessed day writing away.............

Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2024 at 11:31 AM I love your use of the word “fairylife” Bless you, Paula! Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:33 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you love how I use of the word “fairylife” in my "I Breathe Life" write. That makes me happy. Have a very blessed day writing away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2024 at 11:21 AM - Beautiful and uplifting poem, Paula :) - Many thanks :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2024 at 6:31 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you found my "I Breathe Life" write to be a Beautiful and uplifting poem. Hugs... Have a very blessed day writing away.............

Jay Narain November 14, 2024 at 10:47 AM Nice work, human poet. Very inspiring. Paula Goldsmith November 14, 2024 at 10:56 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you found my "I Breathe Life" write to be Nice work. Have a very blessed day writing away.............

John Read November 14, 2024 at 10:42 AM Your on the right path Paula God bless. Paula Goldsmith November 14, 2024 at 10:55 AM Thank You for reading/writing/your support. Glad you enjoyed reading my "I Breathe Life" write.   Have a very blessed day writing away..........

Paula Goldsmith November 14, 2024 at 10:31 AM I Breathe Life~11/14/2024~Written By Human Poet