I Believe In God

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I do believe that God made all things right.
     Let us rejoice for all is bright since God
          In kindness made this world in harmony.

For look, is not the sea so full of food?
     What would we do without sardines and whales?
          And aren't our fields so full of corn and wheat?

Do not the trees grow fruit that satiates?
     Could we stop eating apples all the time?
          Our orchards are so full of tasty fare.

The forest praises, it purifies our air.
  Thank God for palms, and oaks and stately spruce,
     Bushy hazels and the silver birches,
          The Lord created for our pleasure trees.

I know God's great creation were the birds.
  I love so much to see them fly so high.
     I am delighted by their melodies
          and so admire their elegance in flight.

God, bless the wind in all its many forms
     They clear the clouds and pollinate the trees.
          Such forces God did not create in vain?

So full of joy, rejoice and bless the Lord.
It is a must to take good care. Praise God.

Placed 1



24 December 2021

''B'' Forms, 10 Plus lines Poetry Contest
Subject BELIEVE
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/21/2022 3:53:00 AM
"I know God's great creation were the birds. I love so much to see them fly so high. I am delighted by their melodies and so admire their elegance in flight.".... I too love birds and love this stanza much
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Date: 1/20/2022 10:59:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your First Place win in my contest B Forms with your beautiful poem, like your image too ~Constance
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Date: 1/13/2022 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "I Believe in God" is a Beautiful write. Love It. Have a blessed day...................
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Date: 1/11/2022 8:05:00 AM
And you begin your revelation with: For look, is not the sea so full of food? and then you extrapolate the blessings of God! Congratulations, Victor!
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Date: 1/10/2022 9:09:00 PM
WoW! Victor, Your poem expresses the “ wonder” of God. I too believe. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great evening my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:16:00 PM
God has much to thank for. You have beautifully depicted things that for which we could thank God. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/10/2022 5:21:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your outstanding and well-deserved win. You've written an exquisite poem that is full of wonderful concept metaphors.
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Date: 12/29/2021 7:10:00 PM
One of your best poems, Victor! Oozing gratitude for the gift of life in this realm
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Date: 12/29/2021 12:19:00 PM
hallelujah (in Hebrew: Praise the LORD). Romans by Paul, chapter 1, calls this Revelation of God in Nature. You give such delicious details. Your details of trees won me all over again, Victor. Your first line - nay all of stanza #1 - is sweet to Abba-Father-God, giver of good gifts (James 1)
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Date: 12/29/2021 4:41:00 AM
The earth and its beauty is such a creation for us as humans and animals to enjoy. I hope that we as humans begin to take better care of it or at least the space in which we occupy. Thanks for all your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/27/2021 12:37:00 PM
Nicely done Victor, in praise of all God given blessings. Good entry for contest..Be glad now to welcome 2022, it’s been a trying year one way and another…Delice
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Date: 12/27/2021 12:03:00 PM
- The source of life, wisdom, joy and all the beautiful and wonderful in nature ... in divine attributes, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/26/2021 2:10:00 PM
Yes let us rejoice and give thanks!
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:31:00 PM
a praiseworthy poem about praise of God. WeLL done, Victor
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Date: 12/25/2021 9:13:00 PM
God created this universe and everything in it. We can only look and marvel at his creation with awe. We have no right to destroy what God created . Let mankind and all created beings sing glory to the Lord ! God bless you now and in the New Year 2022
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Date: 12/25/2021 8:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for this beautiful poem dearest Victor. God bless you my friend. With love from Ann xx
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Date: 12/25/2021 7:41:00 PM
A touching, worshipping pen! I love every line. May His grace be over you! Thank you for this poem Hugs, sally
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Date: 12/25/2021 1:03:00 PM
Your wonderful poem of praise for God and His creation, is fraught with beauty and touches the heart. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 12/24/2021 8:29:00 PM
Very beautiful verse, God did create our beautiful universe. Merry, Merry Christmas my friend
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Date: 12/24/2021 7:34:00 PM
A special gift of Praise on the day we celebrate the birth of Jesus Victor. Very moving and beautiful. Thank you. I hope you are having an amazing Christmas. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/24/2021 8:26:00 AM
Victor, this is an exquisite verse of gratefulness. My friend, much acquiescences to your brilliant thoughts. As you so eloquently portray, the exuberance of God's windfalls underline the fairness of our quiddity
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Date: 12/24/2021 8:05:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, my friend.
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Date: 12/24/2021 6:45:00 AM
Your wonder write on Nature and God's creation is outstanding, Victor:) thoroughly enjoyed and so true:)
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Date: 12/24/2021 4:47:00 AM
Much benevolence to your divine thoughts my friend. Bounty of God's gifts bless our lives as you so brilliantly illustrate, Victor. Well written, as always.
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Date: 12/24/2021 3:03:00 AM
A verse of great praise Victor. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
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