I beg death an honor

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Poetic Form: Haibun
Inspired: 2023 December 23

*3rd Place*
Good wishes for my enemy
Contest Judged: 2024 January 04
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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"Forgiveness knows naught the hour to forfeit," ... Ere my time on this field of honor, be this my last decree, for within my final breath, I say to the Eastern Wind who hails through the realm ... I wish you were dead and placed on top me~embrace as friends forever

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Silent One

Date: 1/6/2024 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the forgiveness contest..Expressed so well..

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/6/2024 2:28:00 PM

Thanks, Silent One. Tho' a piece wreaks senryu than haiku, pref it be so for the scene host vultures and Poe's haunts, oh well--'tis done. Aloha, William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/4/2024 7:26:00 PM

A very beautiful hibun on forgiveness. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2024 7:46:00 PM

My thanks, Christuraj, as always, my friend, Aloha, William

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/4/2024 11:52:00 AM

Oh wow, Shakespeare eat your heart out. This is amazing William. Congratulations on your top win! Aloha Anaya & Milo ,")

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2024 11:58:00 AM

Thank you, Anaya, for passing your encouragement to a mind still in wander and wondering, Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/4/2024 10:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful Haibun write on forgiveness. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2024 10:09:00 AM

Ah, thanks, Paula, 'twas this note of yours that alerted me of the contest results had been posted. You are a dear friend, Aloha, William