I Ask

I ask to be able to forgive wrongdoings I ask for love, peace and harmony amongst mayhem I ask for truth and righteousness I ask for prominence of spirit I ask for absolution I ask for the truth, courage, remembrance and glory in life Spiritual consciousness is present so I will ask

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Ts Lewis

Date: 11/10/2009 5:57:00 AM

I ask for prominence of spirit A very deep request. When the spirit hungers it seems to find its source of food. May you continue to become enlightened.

James Fraser

Date: 10/22/2009 6:40:00 AM

Kool piece Pamela >> James

Canny Amah

Date: 10/20/2009 4:03:00 PM

Pam, dear, this is alright! Poetry attune with the yearnings of the human mind! At last, when the poet's epoch surfaces, when all negatives would fail to hold, that which is good, which today looks utopian, would be granted ... and that without our labour of askings!!! Cheers. Canny.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/19/2009 3:32:00 PM

thankxxx Pam for your encouraging comments on my poetry. I absolutely luv I Ask ... poignant and moving ... makes a body think beyond ... beyond...