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I, As a Child

I, as a child, loved fairy tales But did not believe them still And playing at the Great Wall Heard a giant sleeping Felt the earth quaking But not one stone would fall China hunts where the eagle thrills The sky, and as evening pales I watch the giant with a nervous eye And long for morning For I must know if the eagle can fly The clouds gallivanting. On my belly lying in the grass I wait for the hunter to go Puzzled at the silent rifle's glint While the hunter patiently fed Little fawns and birds his bred Broken wings bound with floss From India, a double mask of woe What will the doctors do with splint Hunters and giants I cannot trust Fragile things at innocense play The deep gold is only rust Power corrupts ... patience is delay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/11/2009 6:33:00 AM
excellently written David, humanity can be cruel, yet in this piece you almost act as a gentle narrator, very nice piece. In reference to your comment left on my work "beyond perception", your work is safe here at the soup. It was I, whom deleted works without a back up copy dear one. My best to you and yours, Lucinda
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:07:00 AM
Wow, powerful, excellent write. So many lines I went back to read over, too many to repeat here. Disturbing. Outstanding poetry. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/8/2009 1:58:00 PM
the deep gold is only rust,ow so true! power corrupts-unfortunately bringing this world close to hell and back-patience is delay,we need lot of that-great,just great-charma
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Date: 4/8/2009 12:36:00 PM
intense, imaginative poetry, David, thanks for commenting on 'broken friends' the nectar in this case refers to alcohol & a close friend of mine who succumbed....jmg
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