I, As a Child

I, as a child, loved fairy tales
But did not believe them still
And playing at the Great Wall
Heard a giant sleeping
Felt the earth quaking
But not one stone would fall
China hunts where the eagle thrills
The sky, and as evening pales
I watch the giant with a nervous eye
And long for morning 
For I must know if the eagle can fly
The clouds gallivanting.

On my belly lying in the grass
I wait for the hunter to go
Puzzled at the silent rifle's glint
While the hunter patiently fed
Little fawns and birds his bred
Broken wings bound with floss
From India, a double mask of woe
What will the doctors do with splint
Hunters and giants I cannot trust
Fragile things at innocense play
The deep gold is only rust
Power corrupts ... patience is delay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 11, 2009 at 6:33 AM
excellently written David, humanity can be cruel, yet in this piece you almost act as a gentle narrator, very nice piece. In reference to your comment left on my work "beyond perception", your work is safe here at the soup. It was I, whom deleted works without a back up copy dear one. My best to you and yours, Lucinda
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April 9, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Wow, powerful, excellent write. So many lines I went back to read over, too many to repeat here. Disturbing. Outstanding poetry. Love, Shar
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April 8, 2009 at 1:58 PM
the deep gold is only rust,ow so true! power corrupts-unfortunately bringing this world close to hell and back-patience is delay,we need lot of that-great,just great-charma
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April 8, 2009 at 12:36 PM
intense, imaginative poetry, David, thanks for commenting on 'broken friends' the nectar in this case refers to alcohol & a close friend of mine who succumbed....jmg
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