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I Apologize To All In Advance

I APOLOGIZE TO ALL IN ADVANCE I want to apologize to all in advance; if I am more little than rude I have traveled a long way and can appear a little bit over shrewd Happy in life have I been; to walk along wearing others old shoes Though now I can say I am picky just to whose old shoes I chose It is fair to say just like others; I have been in life to hell and back It has made me as very arrogant and times more often I lack tact But I'm not born from bad intentions when I put across my views I can pick funny, sad and happy; and can get stuck into the blues Then any way but loose as I can just shove it in between the lines And not far I would say getting it down; so it comes up in rhymes Reading other learned poets I can more than see the hidden depth There are times I end up thinking have we somewhere already met So in any way I end up offending you I can assure it wasn't meant As I was born in a farmyard me, and not down at the nun convent My motto to myself always remains the same is just to let it all flow If what I write doesn’t get a rating then just get on with it, let it go There is more I could write about, but; not all my poems let it show As I'm just a quick and easy lass to ever get into the corrected flow Would just love to write a sonnet and wow you all between the eyes But it's just not my forte; if I did it would just to me be tongue-tied Some write about the cosmos, but; to me, it never seems to appeal Others write with such intellect; like it's understood and a done deal Others write of words that seem to liquefy and, to us all they anoint Whereas the common old me writes; as to, get straight to the point My mind cannot cope; with the metaphors, it takes to write the lines To the rules and regulations; that make poetry, I can't see the signs Expanding my written vocabulary is for me never going to be an aim As I know what I put down to others can seem a bit more than lame I pen as it comes leaving those brave enough to read and so endure With this brazen overrated brave imagination of I, Miss Indiana Shaw Indiana Shaw . . . ; )

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Date: 7/24/2017 2:45:00 PM
I love your style of writing, Indiana, just let them keep coming.. ~*
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/12/2017 7:12:00 PM
Late reply here "Eve" I think - But thank you very much and on with it I went - he he he . . . ; )
Date: 9/17/2016 2:12:00 PM
Forget about what people say or like; write what you want. I love your poems, I really enjoy them.
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/17/2016 3:17:00 PM
Bless you "Bukiwe" and so pleased you like - thanks for making my day . . . ; )
Date: 9/12/2016 6:27:00 PM
Hi Indiana. There is no need to apologize. Any individual is unique and they have unique styles. Some like metaphor and some don't. Some write about Cosmos and some write about anything they want to write. The only thing is keep writing my friend and enjoy because you're not going to stay the same you're going to keep getting better.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/16/2016 11:26:00 PM
Whatever it is keep doing it.... you're great..
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/16/2016 12:46:00 PM
Thanks "Pashang" - sad really because my head is just full of more somber poems that deserve more than a "Couplet" to be able to express them - once I learn the art of putting them together in another way I might just get there - thanks for your encougament "Pashang" - I just need to get some more reading in from the masters of real poety I think . . . ; )

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