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I Am the Storm

I am warm wind rising into cold air I am surging unstable atmosphere I am the tangible feeling up there The tension in sky before I appear The ominous still before the severe I am our Mother Nature’s rebel child I am barometric deviant wild I am lightning strikes waiting to perform I am the hail and thunder reconciled A blackened midday sky. I am the storm. Oct 19, 2022 Dizain Poetry Contest – Nature Theme Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Date: 11/7/2022 2:05:00 PM
~I am Mother Nature's rebel child ~I love that line especially. Beautiful dizain!
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:22:00 AM
Wow! Hat I LOVE this poem; congratulations on a well-deserved high placement
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Date: 11/6/2022 4:23:00 AM
"Mother Nature’s rebel child" - Wow! Very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/5/2022 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in Sotto's contest. Way to go. Creative idea penned. Sara
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Date: 11/5/2022 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations from the bottom of my heart for winning the contest, Hat. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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Date: 10/27/2022 8:56:00 AM
Your stormy imagery is stunning Hat. Very nicely done! All best :)
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Date: 10/21/2022 12:25:00 PM
I like how you build the suspense, line by line, then the closing lines deliver so fully, this is excellent, best wishes for the contest~
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Date: 10/19/2022 11:40:00 AM
Hello Hat Buckert, this is all stormy. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/19/2022 10:58:00 AM
Great imagery!
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