Hat Bueckert Poet Dizain

I Am the Storm

I am warm wind rising into cold air
I am surging unstable atmosphere
I am the tangible feeling up there
The tension in sky before I appear
The ominous still before the severe
I am our Mother Nature’s rebel child
I am barometric deviant wild
I am lightning strikes waiting to perform
I am the hail and thunder reconciled
A blackened midday sky. I am the storm.


Oct 19, 2022
Dizain Poetry Contest – Nature Theme
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Ann Peck November 7, 2022 at 2:05 PM ~I am Mother Nature's rebel child ~I love that line especially. Beautiful dizain!

Terry Miller November 6, 2022 at 7:22 AM Wow! Hat I LOVE this poem; congratulations on a well-deserved high placement

Christuraj Alex November 6, 2022 at 4:23 AM "Mother Nature’s rebel child" - Wow! Very beautiful. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick November 5, 2022 at 2:30 PM Congratulations on this winning work in Sotto's contest. Way to go. Creative idea penned. Sara

Sotto Poet November 5, 2022 at 8:20 AM Congratulations from the bottom of my heart for winning the contest, Hat. You have composed such an excellent poem.

Linda Alice Fowler October 27, 2022 at 8:56 AM Your stormy imagery is stunning Hat. Very nicely done! All best :)

Michelle Faulkner October 21, 2022 at 12:25 PM I like how you build the suspense, line by line, then the closing lines deliver so fully, this is excellent, best wishes for the contest~

Darlene De Beaulieu October 19, 2022 at 11:40 AM Hello Hat Buckert, this is all stormy. Enjoy your day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues October 19, 2022 at 10:58 AM Great imagery!