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      Let's Get Emotional Contest ~ August 16, 2024

                 Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

I am the overjoyed look in your eyes One I sincerely hope gives great delight An emotion you might characterize As an unsuspected but welcomed sight I am a thought you don't visualize

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Date: 9/1/2024 5:04:00 PM
Well done, Lin. Congratulations. BTW, several contestants did theirs on Surprise. I guess it was the hardest topic, being my form was so restrictive as you told me. Yours was the only one to make my list.
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Date: 8/31/2024 12:08:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 8/30/2024 12:45:00 PM
Alright I feel you! Surprise isn't always welcome is it! But for the midst part it is a happy emotion...congratulations xo
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Date: 8/17/2024 11:30:00 PM
Delightful poem!
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Date: 8/19/2024 12:39:00 PM
Thanks a lot, AA.
Date: 8/16/2024 10:57:00 AM
Nice one.
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Date: 8/19/2024 12:45:00 PM
Thanks, Jay.
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Date: 8/19/2024 12:39:00 PM
Thanks, Jay.
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Date: 8/19/2024 12:39:00 PM
Thanks, Jay.

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