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      Let's Get Emotional Contest ~ August 16, 2024

                 Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

I AM SURPRISE


I am the overjoyed look in your eyes
One I sincerely hope gives great delight
An emotion you might characterize
As an unsuspected but welcomed sight
I am a thought you don't visualize
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Well done, Lin. Congratulations. BTW, several contestants did theirs on Surprise. I guess it was the hardest topic, being my form was so restrictive as you told me. Yours was the only one to make my list.
Agustin Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 12:08 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Woods Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 12:45 PM
Alright I feel you! Surprise isn't always welcome is it! But for the midst part it is a happy emotion...congratulations xo
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 11:30 PM
Delightful poem!
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Thanks a lot, AA.
Narain Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Nice one.
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 12:45 PM
Thanks, Jay.
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Thanks, Jay.
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Thanks, Jay.
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