I Am Sure

I am sure





A no brainer
that fought like sin,
Too much aggro
for want of snogging,
Lay in a fix of drugs
in shooting gallery,
Wearing the best of
the bib and tucker,
Became a crapshoot,
a bunny rabbit
that wore long johns,
Wandered in main drag
with ghetto blaster,
Out of the rathole
up to a ritz,
Dreams smoked
as fortitude failed,
Guts were an eyewash,
I was no fool,
Giving up a think
will turn on,
A woman of today
I wasn't born yesterday !






Written July 27th, 2015
For contest "Colloquialisms" by Laura
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Upma, wow totally tongue twisting, great for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13 and all your visits to my poetry
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 3:33 AM
- Really skillful written Dr. Upma - There's always a "light in the tunnel" ..... the one that is wise will find the exit - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Dr, Upma, I like how you cut the lines it makes the thought be intensified!!~Olive Eloisa
Tate Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 7:14 AM
A fine touch here, Upma. Your use of symbolism is masterful.
Onclaud Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 6:49 AM
so cool, dr. upma.. i like this pretty neat piece.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 6:54 AM
Thnx dear!
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