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How can I live without sugar, fructose, glucose, I love cookies, candies, pies, and pastries and cake; oh that sweet, sweet lactose, dextrose and cellulose, grandma's cherry jam and her cupcakes and cheesecake. I love cookies, candies, pies, and pastries and cake, that lovely white crystalline substance I love; grandma's cherry jam and her cupcakes and cheesecake, I am so sweet, my love calls me his sugar dove. That lovely white crystalline substance I love, I start with candy - coated honey cereal; I am so sweet, my love calls me his sugar dove, in the afternoon, coca cola ethereal. I start with candy-coated honey cereal, never, ever, no "SUGAR" - that illegal drug; in the afternoon, coca cola ethereal, yes, I should change my name to Sugar Lady Bug. Never, ever, no "SUGAR"- that illegal drug, oh that sweet, sweet lactose, dextrose and cellulose; yes, I should change my name to Sugar Lady Bug, how can I live without sugar, fructose, glucose! __________________________ February 17, 2017 Poetry/Pantoum/I Am So Sweet Copyright Protected, ID 17- 876-918-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 2/22/2017 10:52:00 PM
Wonderful Pantoum, loved it. Such a "Sugar Sally"!
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Date: 2/17/2017 1:00:00 PM
Well there goes my diet. :) Definitely sweet and loaded with poetic calories. Nice one.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2017 7:04:00 PM
Chris thanks for the nice comment
Date: 2/17/2017 12:16:00 PM
A tasty sweet write! Good luck in the contest xomo!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2017 7:00:00 PM
Maureen thanks for visiting, appreciate
Date: 2/17/2017 12:05:00 PM
Makes me high just reading it...best wishes in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2017 12:10:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, yes that's a lot of sugar high!

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