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I Am So Sweet

How can I live without sugar, fructose, glucose, I love cookies, candies, pies, and pastries and cake; oh that sweet, sweet lactose, dextrose and cellulose, grandma's cherry jam and her cupcakes and cheesecake. I love cookies, candies, pies, and pastries and cake, that lovely white crystalline substance I love; grandma's cherry jam and her cupcakes and cheesecake, I am so sweet, my love calls me his sugar dove. That lovely white crystalline substance I love, I start with candy - coated honey cereal; I am so sweet, my love calls me his sugar dove, in the afternoon, coca cola ethereal. I start with candy-coated honey cereal, never, ever, no "SUGAR" - that illegal drug; in the afternoon, coca cola ethereal, yes, I should change my name to Sugar Lady Bug. Never, ever, no "SUGAR"- that illegal drug, oh that sweet, sweet lactose, dextrose and cellulose; yes, I should change my name to Sugar Lady Bug, how can I live without sugar, fructose, glucose! __________________________ February 17, 2017 Poetry/Pantoum/I Am So Sweet Copyright Protected, ID 17- 876-918-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.
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James Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 10:52 PM
Wonderful Pantoum, loved it. Such a "Sugar Sally"!
Green Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Well there goes my diet. :) Definitely sweet and loaded with poetic calories. Nice one.
La France Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 7:04 PM
Chris thanks for the nice comment
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 12:16 PM
A tasty sweet write! Good luck in the contest xomo!
La France Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Maureen thanks for visiting, appreciate
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Makes me high just reading it...best wishes in the contest.
La France Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 12:10 PM
Thanks Charlie, yes that's a lot of sugar high!
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