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I Am Poetically Bankrupt

© Arthur Vaso 2014 ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Notes: This poem was formally called “Winter Blizzard” I just posted it with a new title. If you know of what I am referring, then 2 more must I do More Notes: This poem is for sale for 2 million dollars, however I will give any major Museum at 10% discount.

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Kp Nunez

Date: 4/16/2015 6:03:00 AM

LOL! I really love this. I was new when I first saw this so I forgot to comment. Nice to visit again...hahaha

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/16/2015 8:26:00 PM

Thank you, this is one of those poems, I too can come and read over, and over and over again!!!!! hugs

James Fraser

Date: 11/3/2014 2:27:00 PM

And here's me thinking it was a White Cat in a Snowstorm. Very witty indeed, James.....

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/16/2015 8:24:00 PM

Well actually........... was supposed to be Top Secret that part!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/20/2014 11:07:00 PM

Oh my gosh... this is great! Here I am refreshing the page about two or three times thinking that something is wrong with my computer... doh! I like your sense of humor, mate... dry and clever :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/16/2015 8:22:00 PM

Thanks Timothy, somehow I missed responding to some comments here!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/20/2014 6:52:00 AM

What have you done Arthur? It's a jackpot. Who says you are bankrupt. You have written world's smallest possible poem- the (null)poem (if the title is not considered a part). No one can write (-) poem( if one can then it's you) You are unbeaten. Hahahahaha

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/16/2015 8:22:00 PM

Thank you Kindly Rajat, much appreciated!!

James Horn

Date: 10/19/2014 5:35:00 PM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/ poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID= 608099#comments I am just trying to show the difficulty with trying to put information into POST COMMENTS box. Jim Horn

James Horn

Date: 10/19/2014 5:32:00 PM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=608099#comments

James Horn

Date: 10/19/2014 5:17:00 PM

Was that poetically or politically bankrupt? A poet could never be poetically bankrupt. If he or she was, they would no longer be a poet. A poet is a poet from the day her or she first started writing until the day they day. Your mind would have to be mentally corrupt before you could be poetically bankrupt. If writing poetry for you is hard, maybe you can purchase a poetry credit card. Jim Horn

James Horn
Date: 10/19/2014 5:20:00 PM

Don't you really like how your printer can become poetically bankrupt. Just who is having to conform to whom? Jim Horn

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/19/2014 2:15:00 PM

However, the clouds are in the sky. Might just be multi-millionaire write. Congratulations on the being feature as the poem of the day. Verlena

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2014 11:21:00 PM

Thanks Verlena, I sure hope so!!!!!! LOL

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/19/2014 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations Arthur on Poem of the Day honors. I really like the title and text. Quite simple and to the point. Maybe you'll make some money on it after all. Cheers!! Gary

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2014 11:01:00 PM

Thanks Gary, my bank account is still as empty as the poem!!!

James Horn
Date: 10/19/2014 5:25:00 PM

If you notice, our comments box has become space as well as poetically bankrupt.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2014 11:54:00 AM

- I buy it ...................................................................................................................................................................... when I become rich !!!! - // Anne-Lise :)))

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2014 10:58:00 PM

You are already rich, with a beautiful heart and kindness!!!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/19/2014 8:28:00 AM

Looks like you drew a blank. Congratulations on being chosen poem of the day. You did very well with this restrictive new form. Zero syllables, no words, no lines, no meter, no feet, no rhyme. Wow, you did well, I tried the form myself but could only come up with a title, every time I came up with even a word, the form was broken. I finally gave up and wrote nothing.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/19/2014 6:00:00 PM

hahaha

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/19/2014 8:07:00 AM

LOL... I think this says it all. I couldn't have said it any better.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/19/2014 7:56:00 AM

Oh baby this is great! You have made my day! Ha. Sugar, you rock :) mwah!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/19/2014 6:15:00 AM

YOU ARE SO FUNNY!!! Here you are with Poem of the DAY with just a title. I have much to learn from you. This will do for an example in my English I Composition class on the importance of choosing a proper title. THANK YOU!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2014 5:42:00 AM

This is perfect *lol* I may have to have you charged with plagiarism, I have many exactly like this one, it appears the only thing you have changed is the title. ( I had preferred to leave mine blank) perhaps that is why no one has commented.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2014 10:55:00 PM

LOL thanks Richard, I was looking a painting in Paris of a blanc white canvas, and said hey I can do that!!!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/19/2014 5:09:00 AM

Poem of the day - like you Arthur - I am lost for words:-) Many congrats hugs Jan xxx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2014 10:53:00 PM

Thanks Jan!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/19/2014 2:20:00 AM

Oh my Arthur! Brilliant ideas u hv my friend! That's what makes u special fav of many plus me! I take it at the original price,, give me ur account no,, hurry!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 10:18:00 PM

Oh my thank you, would you like maybe 2?

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/18/2014 11:22:00 PM

I see that your muse and you got lost in an early and very severe snow blizzard, Arthur. Lol.. :) early winter ah... Lol... Cheers! Xxx D.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 10:17:00 PM

I am forever lost, thanks!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/18/2014 11:12:00 PM

:O!!!! mmmmmmn it is really :P i don;t think so Buddy Art.. :D!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 10:17:00 PM

:) thanks Buddy Olive

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2014 10:00:00 PM

Good price :) I hope you get your wealth back. eve

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 10:16:00 PM

LOL Thanks Eve

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/18/2014 9:53:00 PM

Think I spotted a grammatical error on line 3. Sure looks like the snow came early this year...I can let you have a few words if that would help....Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 10:16:00 PM

Be my guest

Tim Smith

Date: 10/18/2014 8:28:00 PM

Shouldn't you be at the pub watching the Habs beat up on the Avalanche? One of your best writes...A7 and a fav

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 10:15:00 PM

ah they win now, by Xmas they shall be as pitiful as I

Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2014 8:11:00 PM

Arthur I think you may mean that you have lost your muse or is this is a poem about a polar bear written with a white font on a white background:-) Hugs jan xxxx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2014 11:03:00 PM

I lost my Merlot not my muse!! :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 10/18/2014 8:11:00 PM

You are that "poetically bankrupt"? lol. There is nothing there :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2014 11:02:00 PM

That was the idea! :)