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I Am One- With the Sky Dancer

I relinquish all emotions, all sadness that could fill oceans; in a great leaping, twirling prance, I abandon myself to dance. Spinning- I surrender my grief, that came to me a deathly thief; whirling breathless in a wild trance, I abandon MYSELF to dance. Reckless and wanton I leap high, I leave forsaken and just fly; empty of tears- spirits I glance, I abandon myself to d a n c e . All the spirits are watching me, I see the them- the he and she; pray give this Indian girl a chance, I abandon myself to dance. ________________________ July 2, 2018 Poetry/Kyrielle/I Am One- With the Sky Dancer Copyright Protected, ID, 18-1037-510-01 all Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Abandon 2 sponsor, Brenda Chiri First Place

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Date: 7/27/2018 5:57:00 PM
Beautiful, refreshing, hopeful and inspiring! Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed this!
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Date: 7/27/2018 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Constance . Such a deep emotional well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2018 9:16:00 AM
Returning to extend BIG congratulations on your top win with this outstanding piece! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 7/25/2018 4:48:00 PM
Such a great take on 'abandonment', Constance. A lovely Kyrielle for sure and congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandar
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Date: 7/25/2018 9:24:00 AM
Abandonment to dance works. I should do that more often; I used to, a lot. Lovely piece dear poetess, congratulations on your top win! xomo <3
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:49:00 AM
Fantastic, congrats on top placement.
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Date: 7/25/2018 4:55:00 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL Constance. I see why it was honored with first placement! Congratulations my friend! : )
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Date: 7/23/2018 1:55:00 PM
This is an amazingly beautiful piece - my kind of poem - the kind I wish I could have written! So lovely! Hugs and love. Pandita
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Date: 7/21/2018 3:53:00 AM
Wonderful rhyme. A poem that is easy to get lost in.
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Date: 7/5/2018 7:11:00 PM
I love it! Makes me want to dance, too.
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:19:00 AM
Amazing poetry. I liked the video and the strong words.
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:10:00 AM
BW.. Just Beautiful!!
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