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I Am Number Three

walking on water
past evergreens and mountains
wake my true love there




Posted: 09/19/2014
Birthdate: 11/28/1953
(My Path and Destiny Numbers Are Both Three)

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Andrea Dietrich

May 11, 2017 at 7:52 PM

CRuising around here for the third time because it's a charm!!!

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2017 at 3:48 PM

Just cruising over here to say, Thinking of you and I hope you are well.

James Fraser

October 30, 2014 at 6:07 PM

Image laden Haiku, belated congratulations, James :)

Roy Jerden

October 5, 2014 at 5:55 AM

Love the haiku/image combination! Congratulations! Well done.

Charlotte Puddifoot

October 5, 2014 at 5:19 AM

this is another very lovely haiku, it's a popular three line form! congrats on your win in the contest :)

Faye Gibson

October 4, 2014 at 4:20 PM

Congratulations, Maurice, on your beautiful write. Thanks for the visits to my work; my husband and I are in transition right now with a move to Florida, so my soup time is limited for a while. I do enjoy reading your work, although I am not commenting as much as I would normally do.

Reason A. Poteet

October 4, 2014 at 1:41 PM

nice, a haiku of open interpretation. Congratulations on your win, Maurice.

Barbara Gorelick

October 4, 2014 at 7:54 AM

Cool! Congrats. BG

Brenda Meier-Hans

October 4, 2014 at 7:51 AM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely Haiku Maurice.

Tim Smith

October 4, 2014 at 7:14 AM

Congrats Superstar :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 4, 2014 at 5:55 AM

Wonderful write and image, congrats on the win, Maurice

Jan Allison

October 4, 2014 at 4:11 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

October 4, 2014 at 1:54 AM

So beautiful, and now I can see the picture here too! Congratulations, and your number three fits you to a T!!

Paul Callus

September 25, 2014 at 1:26 PM

Lovely and creative haiku that relates well with the picture you inserted above....gl in contest, Maurice. // paul

Paul Callus

October 7, 2014 at 12:24 PM

...and back with merited congratulations on a great podium finish!

Seren Roberts

September 19, 2014 at 9:36 PM

Belated birthday wishes Maurice,its mine on Thursday, are you a Libra too?....lovely Haiku, .....Seren

Poet Destroyer A

September 19, 2014 at 6:05 PM

OOO, Is this for Andrea's number contest, or the creative haiku contest.. Well, it is good for both. Now, I will look up your destiny number, right after I tag you... LOL... nice going on this haiku. Walking on water hu... :)...LInda

Casarah Nance

September 19, 2014 at 4:50 PM

Great Haiku. Cool that both your numbers are 3. I think this is a cool way to learn everyone's birthdays too, yours is only 20 days after mine, lets' party :)

Nette Onclaud

September 19, 2014 at 2:39 PM

definitely, characteristic of a three person.. lovely 'ku, Maurice!.. huggs

Maurice Yvonne

September 22, 2014 at 12:20 PM

Yes, I am a three and there is no changing that. Thank you so much for your kind comments and support.

Tim Smith

September 19, 2014 at 2:37 PM

Wonderful image and great poem....you are number one with me

Maurice Yvonne

September 22, 2014 at 12:17 PM

I can't really argue with that Tim. HAHA! You are number one with me as well my friend.

Jan Allison

September 19, 2014 at 2:21 PM

lovely descritpive Haiku Maurice - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison

September 22, 2014 at 12:18 PM

LOL I hope this does well for you Maurice - mine was 8 lines sorry no way am I deleting such a tough write - had I been a number 3 of course I would have taken pity on you LOL Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

September 22, 2014 at 12:16 PM

Thank you for your well wishes. I am just putting this out there but if everybody deleted their entry I think my chances would be a lot better.