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I Am My Own Hero

Spent many hours with young blossoms and weeds, I, a new child in a garden of lot. Yield to the garden and sat down with needs. Where no one could see, but constantly fought. Invisible to the world since I was young by nature's hand, not allowed to voice judgments as it did not matter because a woman had no freedom of her choice. Uprooted off from Nature's restrictions rosed and walked freely and followed planned dreams without no limits or hesitation. Like cool refreshing unrestricted streams. I am my own hero obviously wishes, dreams are taken seriously! 11/20/2017

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Date: 12/9/2017 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve - well-done, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/29/2017 12:04:00 AM
I bet you are, Eve. You couldn't be less than a hero when you have such a strong will power which shows well enough through your wonderful writing. Congrats!
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Date: 11/28/2017 6:52:00 PM
Back to wish you Congratulations on your very well deserved win Eve :) ~ Judy
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Date: 11/28/2017 4:25:00 PM
So true for all of us. Wise words in a well written sonnet. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/28/2017 4:13:00 PM
Very creative, Eve--CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 11/28/2017 4:10:00 PM
A wise perspective to the topic... Congrats warm and hugs! ... Isor
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Date: 11/28/2017 4:10:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Eve!
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Date: 11/28/2017 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice win, Eve ...
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Date: 11/28/2017 9:50:00 AM
Returning with congratulations Eve on your winning placement with your excellent poem..
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Date: 11/28/2017 9:21:00 AM
And a hero to so many others too.. Wonderful poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 11/25/2017 7:48:00 PM
Eve, that is so cool to do it on oneself as a hero. I like your clever take on this theme!! I like the metaphors too.
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Date: 11/21/2017 8:58:00 PM
A great, empowering theme Eve. Wonderfully expressed.. 'Like cool refreshing unrestricted streams' just beautiful. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/21/2017 6:50:00 PM
Good for you.... nicely done
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Date: 11/21/2017 5:38:00 PM
BRAVO!!
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Date: 11/21/2017 9:16:00 AM
Very lovely sonnet Eve. I love the theme of being one's own hero. Best of luck in the contest :) ~Judy
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Date: 11/21/2017 8:52:00 AM
Great indeed ... 'Like cool refreshing unrestricted streams,' a beautiful and befitting image ... a nice poem ...
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Date: 11/21/2017 8:45:00 AM
Sometimes we need to inspire ourselves to carry on in life, Eve, you are a winner:)
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Date: 11/21/2017 7:59:00 AM
This is great Eve! Very inspiring :)
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Date: 11/21/2017 12:13:00 AM
You are my hero too!! So lovely!
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Date: 11/21/2017 12:04:00 AM
WoW! Eve, This is an outstanding write for the contest theme. It is encourging and uplifting. As a woman it really touched and motivated me dear lady. The thought of "one" being their own hero is very empowering. In my book you have already won. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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