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I Am More

I am more than your definitions more than affixed labels placed on my anatomy more than your misconceptions or even valid perceptions I am more I am more than what's written of me More than what the eye can see more than what the heart can feel more than what you think is real I am more Yes, more... I am even more that the boundaries I set for myself more than the limitations I conceive more than what even I believe to be me I am more emanating from my core are little particles of truth dressed in the light of poetry a mystery revealed a little of the universe ~~outer and inner~~ set free your reality reshaped from a different world view and cultural dimension religious hues shining through all part of who I am now part of you but then again it's true I am more than these... I am a valid element of history soul written in rhyme truth confined to a time lines someone will read and be changed for an instant perhaps eternity thus, I am I was and I will be part of the continuum of life of eternity I am more infinitely more than what you see I am what's meant to be... Eileen Manassian

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 11/9/2017 6:34:00 PM

Nice, loved it. Keep on, keeping on because you are certainly more.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/4/2017 10:48:00 AM

Very mystical ... spiritual write, Eileen. I really was captivated by the weave of your intrepid words. Such an artful poetic tapestry offered to us readers. Your talented pen write golden thoughts. Pure sparkling poetry. An instant fave, my dear friend. Love and joy always.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/24/2017 5:43:00 PM

Yes it is along journey to self acceptance It is a struggle to get there. Yet sooner or later we do get there. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice evening my friends.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/15/2017 8:34:00 AM

We are all more than the sum of the parts we play, it's such a shame that not enough of us realize that, wonderful write Eileen, you are what's meant to be...

Aqua Marine

Date: 10/13/2017 2:09:00 AM

Here, more is much more, less is too little...I deeply appreciate your inner strength, Eileen- and the courage " to say it like it is." You are a true encouragement to those of us needing a firm nudge in the right direction- and away from suspicious negativity, with it's lack of insight. Not everyone else is always " right" in their estimation of us as individuals- who knows what each of us has gone through in a desperate quest to find inner enlightenment? Compassion breeds compassion.xxx! :-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2017 3:48:00 AM

What a thoughtful comment, dear. It's a long journey to self acceptance. I can't say that I'm fully there, but there are days when I am well enough to think that I can withstand anything. There are days when I feel crushed. I write...I always write. This happens to be a good time. Thanks for reading and seeing the heart of the matter. Blessings.

Carole Duet

Date: 10/9/2017 6:51:00 PM

Just beautiful!!! Need I say "more"? A FAV for sure!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2017 3:49:00 AM

Loved this! No, you need not say more, but I need to...THANK YOU! :) I appreciate it, dear.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/9/2017 4:48:00 PM

I arrive late with belated deserved congrats on p.o.t.d., Eileen! You write in the first person, but speak for many of us, especially those who lose faith in themselves and their abilities. This goes to my favs. Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2017 3:50:00 AM

Paul, dear...you are never late. You are....always in my heart. Thank you for your kind comment, dear. I miss you. Life has been so busy of late. Hugs, dear...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/8/2017 10:41:00 PM

You are one beautiful poetess! This poem is my evidence of that!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2017 3:51:00 AM

Your comments drips sweetness, dear. Thank you! :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/8/2017 4:00:00 PM

Wow! This piece is a true depiction of beauty. It was conveyed uniquely and brilliantly. A well flowing poem.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2017 10:20:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi. Good to see you here at my page. Blessings.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/8/2017 8:39:00 AM

Hi Eileen, today we are celebrating our son's wedding. My family is all here from Ontario so I am on cloud 9!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2017 10:19:00 PM

I'm so thrilled for you, Richard. Enjoy the celebrations to the max! Love to the family. May God bless this union with love and happiness.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/4/2017 3:39:00 PM

I came back for more! Hugs and have a wonderful weekend.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2017 3:06:00 AM

Thank you, dear. As always, it's a pleasure to see you here on my page....multiple times at that! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/3/2017 8:02:00 AM

I see congrats are in order POTD!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2017 3:06:00 AM

Thanks, dear. I'm beaming

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/3/2017 8:01:00 AM

Ha ha, great minds indeed! Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2017 3:07:00 AM

:) Yes, great minds! That's affirmative!

Maria Williams

Date: 10/3/2017 12:10:00 AM

Congratulations Eileen on POTD, amazing write like always...Maria

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2017 3:08:00 AM

Thank you, Maria. Kind of you, dear.

John Fleming

Date: 10/2/2017 10:46:00 PM

Very nicely extolled, Eileen...and a much deserving accolade in POTD - extremely well done! My very warmest regards as always. :) john

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2017 3:10:00 AM

Thank you, John. It's good to have your words of affirmation. I'm glad this piece was well received. Hugs

Taylor Kranz

Date: 10/2/2017 7:32:00 PM

WOW that was amazing!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:06:00 PM

Thank you, Taylor. Much appreciated.

Marilyn Williams

Date: 10/2/2017 1:36:00 PM

Best poem I have as a POTD, thus far.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:07:00 PM

That is high praise, indeed. I'm humbled by your kind comment. Thank you.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/2/2017 1:28:00 PM

congratulations eileen excellent pen as always pal

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:08:00 PM

Liam, dear, thank you for the visit. You are always gracious to me.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/2/2017 10:51:00 AM

Yes you are, Eileen - and you raise us up with you! Congratulations.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:08:00 PM

Thank you, dear. My PS community is certainly dear to my heart. Hugs :)

Darren White

Date: 10/2/2017 9:17:00 AM

Richard is right, but instead ot rating your poem, I will fave it. It's so true, and beutiful on top of everything else.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:09:00 PM

To be faved by another poet gives my extreme joy, Darren. Thank you, dear. Blessings.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/2/2017 8:29:00 AM

Back for Congratulations Hugs! ;) I hope this brings you warm smiles all day love all day xomo

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:13:00 PM

It does, Maureen, it does. Thanks for the repeat visit. Those are always extra special! :) XO

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/2/2017 8:23:00 AM

Wow! And wow again. Eileen I loved everything about this amazing write. You have penned a powerful piece . The message of "I am more" spoke loud and clear. I agree you are much more than what could ever be written on a page. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was most definitely well deserved. This would have been an easy seven hands down:-) Alexis

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:16:00 PM

Thanks, Alexis. Each one of us has a wealth of treasure to share with the world. Sometimes we belittle ourselves, and that's a shame. I'm glad this piece conveyed a positive message, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate your words of encouragement and praise. Bless you for that, sweetie. You bring my heart joy...

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2017 7:54:00 AM

You are amazing Eileen! beautiful talented and I am blessed to have you as a friend:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:18:00 PM

Oh, sweetie...as am I. I am blessed to know you and to call you friend. :) I send you lots of cyber hugs. XO

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2017 2:08:00 PM

- You are you ... unique and beautiful, dear friend - hugs & love // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:18:00 PM

As are you, Sunshine. You spread love and light everywhere you go. XOXOX

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/1/2017 10:02:00 AM

Too funny, our poems are very different but we almost have the same titles. What are the odds??! Amazing poem Eileen! I wish we could still rate poems 777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777888888888888888888888888888888888

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2017 8:20:00 PM

That's what I love to see, someone dear to my heart showering me with goodness. Thank you, Richard. I read your poem, but will be by to post soon. Imagine that. Great minds an all that! ;)