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I Am Cosmic Dust

I am made of ancient cosmic dust. Atomic nucleus and particles. By the solar winds, I have been thrust, to be a part so astrological. Atomic nucleus and particles, moving along near the speed of light. To be a part so astrological, my mass and numbers are not finite. Moving along near the speed of light, gathered together by gravity fields. My mass and numbers are not finite. Look up at night, a star filled sky I yield. Gathered together by gravity fields, forever in mans mind, a mystery. Look up at night, a star filled sky I yield, forever to a mans soul, a fantasy. Forever in mans mind a mystery, by the solar winds, I have been thrust. Forever to a mans soul, a fantasy, I am made of ancient cosmic dust.
Entry for the contest "For Heavens Sake" Hostess: Barbara Gorelick Placement: 4th Featured Poem for the week ending 12/18/2010

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Date: 3/7/2011 12:52:00 PM
Many congrats on your two first round successes Paula - luv Janette
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:01:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest.. good luck...
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2010 5:20:00 PM
So glad to see your Cosmic Dust poem featured. Congrats. BG
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:07:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today my friend with luv...
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:50:00 PM
Enjoyed this, the sense of all those particles flying around:)
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Date: 10/10/2010 5:21:00 PM
Yup we are stardust we are golden! Nice one. Congrad's & Thanks for all your nice comments. Light & Love
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:59:00 AM
What a lovely form for this entry. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/4/2010 8:52:00 PM
what an awesome read, Paula. Congrats on your fine win. How cool to see a pantoum done about the cosmos!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/4/2010 7:56:00 AM
What a beautiful pantoum, Paula!! Congratulations on this well derved win!! :)
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on this welldeserved win in the contest, Paula
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Heaven's Sake". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:52:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your super win in BG's contest with this great write.. enjoy another win today my friend with luv..
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:33:00 PM
The use of cosmic dust was so clever. .I loved it. Congrats on your win in my contest. BG
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Date: 9/25/2010 9:39:00 PM
Excellent Paula.. a real treat to read luv... this has winner written all over it.. powerful intro line... good luck my friend... enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 9/25/2010 5:19:00 PM
Very cool entry for Barbara's contest, Paula. I really like the reference to ancient cosmic dust -- that's really profound. A true assessment of what we see around us in the universe. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/25/2010 3:59:00 PM
Very wonderful entry to the contest, Paula
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