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14.08.2025

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  Don't talk to me
  until I've had my coffee
  Brown beans with a round and rich taste
  provide an invigorating effect

  I drink my morning coffee
  with a clear conscience
  A gentle start to the day
  Coffee beans come in all scents and colors
  - I'm brown and smell heavenly

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Date: 8/17/2025 9:19:00 AM
Love this, Anne-Lise! Well done! What a clever entry for the contest! While I drink tea in the morning, I do love and appreciate a good cup of coffee! There is nothing quite so wonderful as the smell of coffee in the morning! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs and blessings.
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Date: 8/15/2025 3:19:00 PM
Anne-Lise, I am the same, must have my cafe to get started in the morn, love that velvety smooth scent and taste, well done, hugs, Constance
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Date: 8/15/2025 1:17:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise I love how it’s more than just coffee here, it’s conscience-clear comfort, a gentle launch into the day. And that last line? “I’m brown and smell heavenly” that’s both a little flirty and a lot cozy. Honestly, it’s like you wrote an ode to the happiest few minutes of every morning. You’ve turned a cup of coffee into a little poem-sized hug. Now I want one. Blessings, My Dear Anne-Lise, Daniel
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Date: 8/15/2025 12:35:00 PM
Nice pic of the lady clad in brown coffee beans. Nice poem too.
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Date: 8/15/2025 12:10:00 PM
Very nice, Beanie! ;)
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Date: 8/15/2025 9:03:00 AM
Wow ! Very unusual, Anne-Lise. Could never have imagined a Norwegian brown. I love it. Pic too. Yum 4 good coffee with cream.x.
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Date: 8/15/2025 4:19:00 AM
Love coffee! Your Poem! Wonderful illustration, wow!
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Date: 8/15/2025 2:09:00 AM
I can relate to this Anne-Lise I am very black in the morning until my morning coffee, thank goodness for Nespresso and that instant hit, fun poem well written GL in the contest, Terry
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Date: 8/14/2025 5:36:00 PM
Wonderful poem...such a smooth flow...and the image was perfect. Best wishes with this poem in the contest, hugs from Texas, Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2025 1:30:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 8/14/2025 4:12:00 PM
I could almost ask you to marry me, Anne-Lise… but my Annie might get a little uptight about that. I’ll settle for a granulated instant instead. I wonder if I could get Annie to wear ‘Gold Blend’ instead of Chanel No 5. Best of luck in the contest. Terry
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2025 1:26:00 AM
- Don't upset Annie, Terry ... remember : "in good times and bad" ... love your sense of humor :) - hugs
Date: 8/14/2025 4:09:00 PM
i can surely relate to this, anne-lise! good luck in the contest...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2025 1:28:00 AM
- I am enjoying my quiet morning time, Ilene :) - hugs
Date: 8/14/2025 2:21:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "I Am Brown" write. What A Great Fun Picture. I love a good cup of hot coffee or ice cold in the summer. "Good Luck" Glad you enjoyed my fun Pink color write. Hugs..........
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2025 1:28:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Paula :) - hugs
Date: 8/14/2025 1:48:00 PM
Stunning! Clever and great to the last drop. I really enjoyed! __Anaya xhugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2025 1:30:00 AM
- ... and I enjoy it to the last drop .. many thanks, Anaya :) - hugs

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