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I Am Bored with Mouse

Me and my mouse, we clicked together so much loved it to bits, loved it to pieces It likes my touch, especially when I tickle its left ear I tap,tap, tap it and it squeaks, squeaks, squeaks It follows me around whenever I do my poetry and I let it roll, run, roll as it goes round and round its wheel... It likes soup. So much so, that it likes it hot, super hot soup... But I am afraid That I am bored with my mouse... Sorry, mouse But I got tired of tickling you. Sorry, mouse But I think you need to rest. My fingers are tired with stroking you... I better rest. It's for the best. I don't think we click too much at all... We'll still be friends, don't worry. And you shouldn't like your soup too hot anyway, because it burns your tongue, and also my fingers because I always need to dip my fingers in to see if it is hot enough. I think I will also keep away from hot soup. I don't like it too spicy. Spicy can get boring too, because it can numb your senses. Sorry, mouse... I am bored with you. But hugs still to you, it was fun while it lasted :) 05012011224p234 *For Linda's I am Bored with __________ contest :) **I got jealous of people talking about how much they love their cats and dogs... I don't have either :(, I only have a mouse... but so sad, I am bored with it now....maybe I should get myself a fish.

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Date: 5/23/2011 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Nikko. It's always good to see you on a winner's list .This was too clever, my friend. your pet mouse!! heehee (reminds me when I wrote of my pet Kia!)
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 5:58:00 PM
Back to reread this tale of Nikko and mouse. So entertaining, yet educational too. wink wink. Have a great weekend-Congrats on this winner! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:36:00 AM
Cute one..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2011 9:07:00 AM
A creative and imaginative write, congrats, Emma x
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:23:00 AM
Many Congrats Nikko on big win in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/13/2011 12:27:00 AM
Very Good. Congrats
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Date: 5/12/2011 4:04:00 PM
Great to see your success Nikko with this worthy poem third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/12/2011 12:28:00 PM
LOL Many congrats on your win, Nikko : )
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Date: 5/12/2011 9:23:00 AM
Loved this one, Nikko. So creative and lots of fun to read! Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, nikko
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:06:00 AM
Enjoyed your friendly chat with your mouse.A wonderful piece,quite funny and sooo witty. Congrats on your well deserved win .Love to you nette, gautami
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:38:00 PM
This is so funny Nikko. Thanks for your concern dear. I was operatrd for an ovarian cyst. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:40:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Nikko. Very clever piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:47:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on your success in my contest with this cute and clever entry luv.. thankxx for constant support...
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:23:00 PM
Another witty , funny and alive write by you.. whatever critter is in your company is a lucky one!!! and thanks for those eyes always watching wink wink... hugs back my sweet Nikko..luv Michael
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Date: 5/4/2011 9:30:00 PM
oi! Nikko, I know this is just 4 contest.. but. its funny, I have all 3 for pets..lol... the dog. who chases the cat. into the house. & the cat who chases the mouse into the walls. (joke). I'm terrified of them mouse. Hate tickling them, I'll stick 2 my lap top it can't run. IS your mouse cordless_ i mean tail less. I think I'm sleepy. I'm like U not making sense. well U always make sense. As for me. I think U need yourself a dolphin... click;; click;; click;;lol...oi... good night,..p.d.
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Date: 5/3/2011 6:32:00 AM
Wishing you luck in the contest! It's been fun, but I've spent way too much time here, longer than I planned. And hey, as it turns out, I found a loophole (there always is one)! I'm gonna do some cleaning up this month! Once I'm done with that, I'm outta here ;)!
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Date: 5/3/2011 2:44:00 AM
Just brilliant!I think u can do most of the things with the key board.So do away with the mouse but don't keep yourself away from the soup.better take it cold.LOL!
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Date: 5/2/2011 2:02:00 PM
I agree with you and relate to your feelings towards dogs, cats and mice, nikko
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Date: 5/2/2011 8:06:00 AM
You brought that little black critter to life....Nikko....what a delightful way to describe that feeling we all seem to share from time to time (me too.... sometime I think I should just get a hammer and smash him out of my life!! lol !!....then maybe I would get other things accomplished)!! Maybe our mouses could get together and have a going away party!!
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Date: 5/2/2011 7:36:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Nikko sweet friend.. good luck luv.. reading when we return from Italy at end of May to judge contest luv.. appreciate..
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Date: 5/2/2011 7:14:00 AM
Nikko, this is very cute. Sometimes we can get bored with the little mouse. It happens for me when I am especially tired. hmmm, i did not see some of the things in this poem that you told me were in it. Was it another poem? YOur poem idea was the most original (unique) in the contest. luv ya, andrea
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Date: 5/2/2011 7:09:00 AM
Hi, niiko. I guess my eyes are O.K. Just had the right eye cataracts removed. Left eye in a couple of weeks. Generally, my vision is lousy,but, for an old guy, I guess no big thing. And here I thought you were talking about your computer mouse. I have 11 cats. You can betcha, there are no meeses around my house. Love, daver
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Date: 5/2/2011 4:30:00 AM
Oh my word! Where do u get this stuff, gurl!! I am amazed that YOU would be bored with your pet mouse. OF ALL PEOPLE!! ha ha. Great piece. Readin it again. I was up late last night reading about your new poet...the one you hadn't heard of b4. hint hint! Have a great Monday. Gwendolen
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