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I Am Alone-2

I am alone I’m all alone Yet again In this sparsely populated plain My dearheart having gone off the screen Giving me a really nasty turn To hit the sad way of the forlorn But your love I never did spurn Thinking of you in the dreamlands that burn. And just once Only once Hand me my overdue recompense Fill me with an ounce of tenderness Just strum these hyper strung weird chords So I could moan thanks in all fairness To the one beating the beast out of breasts A prelude to pulverising the pelvis But your love I never did spurn In Cupid’s fair, in fairylands that burn. I will wait At any rate For whatever it is you deem right To this one with a lot of blights Turned inside out and flaming now bright Crush to get crushed by taut thighs at night But your love I never did spurn Thinking of you in the scrublands that burn. I’m all alone…yet again In this sparsely populated plain My dearheart having gone off the screen Giving me a really nasty turn To hit the sad way of the forlorn But your love I never did spurn Thinking of you in the dreamlands that burn. 16 Feb 13 For Cyndi Macmillan's " My spice box:Sensual poetry" contest For Catie Lindsay's Freeverse contest on 6th mar 13

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Date: 4/18/2013 12:37:00 PM
so soft..deeply alone........
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Date: 3/10/2013 11:33:00 AM
This is great and I think it will win in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/2/2013 5:10:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, SJ! A great write indeed! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/1/2013 7:57:00 PM
Jag, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 3/1/2013 6:16:00 PM
Full of lust and longing and just the right touch of reverance. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/1/2013 3:25:00 PM
"I am alone" - surely not, with sensual work like this! a really unusual piece, your poems so often have an intriguing depth and undertone :)
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Date: 2/20/2013 12:07:00 AM
very amazing write dear Jag... i do enjoyed reading this morning <3 luv and lights :) Sk
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:44:00 PM
Love this poem...
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Date: 2/18/2013 11:06:00 PM
I like this it always touches me that a woman would wait. Sooner or latter God will show me what I've been missing.
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Date: 2/18/2013 10:33:00 PM
this is a very interesting one from you, Jag. I love the repetition of the key lines. Also, it feels lonely. Yes, one that is very interesting to read.
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Date: 2/18/2013 3:13:00 PM
Thinging of you in the dreamlands that burn excellent poetrysoup poet
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Date: 2/17/2013 4:04:00 AM
- A touching and "lonely" poem --- but, beautifully written Jag ! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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