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I Am a Twinkling Star

I twinkle in the eyes of a crazy beholder, Concealing bouquet of flaring smoulder. I flicker sailing in the pitch-dark sky, being bright: Fusing atoms in cores to create heat and light. I am red while cool and turn blue when hot; Luminosity portrays my size & shape on spot. I meet my other mates forming asterism: Targeting the goal of high boosterism. I am considered as the aura of darkness, Since I am visible only in the night airiness. I ignite the spark of faith while I fall,for yearning souls: As they look into me and place a wish,I fulfill them without fouls. I cannot be immortal because of limited nuclear fuel; Once it exhausts I collapse & scatter alike a broken jewel. Note1:You are a Star poetry Contest.(N/A) Contest judged 8-7-2020 Second place in the Contest. Note2: July Na or HM poetry Contest. Sponsored by Constance La France -A Dear Heart.

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/1/2020 9:10:00 PM

When I read your muse I see your emotions reflected in this personification, igniting the spark of faith and hope. You really are a twinkling star Deepa. Congratulations on your win :)

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:46:00 PM

Deepa, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest with this wonderful write _Constance

V. Deepa
Date: 7/31/2020 6:28:00 AM

Thankyou very much dear Constance mam:-) So kind of you to shower light on our NA poems by placing it..Keep inspiring.Much love:-) Have a lovely day:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/29/2020 1:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Constance contest, Deepa. Hugs Eve

V. Deepa
Date: 7/31/2020 6:26:00 AM

Thankyou Eve mam:-) Have a wonderful day.Best wishes for you too.Take care.Much love:-)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 5:48:00 AM

You are a star, my friend; this comes across loudly and clearly.

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 1:12:00 PM

Hello mam, Thanks a bunch. Yes I am Star and You are a Star too:-)I am glad you liked my work. Enjoy your day.Best wishes from Deepa:-)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/29/2020 6:11:00 PM

You are a poetry star, Deepa. A stellar personification of artistic heart and imagination. Simply beautiful! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

V. Deepa
Date: 6/30/2020 7:20:00 AM

Hello Susan mam, Thanks a bunch for your gracious visits and heartwarming reviews.:-) Your pure wishes & compliments will be treasured in my heart.:-) And "You are a Star too".Infact all of our P.S members are stars.Am glad to be one among you all.Lets shine together.:-):-) Take care.Keep writing and keep inspiring.Best wishes from Deepa:-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/29/2020 3:48:00 PM

You know your stars Deepa, so well written. Good luck in the contest. Tom

V. Deepa
Date: 6/30/2020 6:59:00 AM

Hello Tom sir, Thanks a lot for your constant appreciation and encouragement.:-)I feel delightful reading your comments. Best wishes for you too.:-) Take care.Have a great day. ~Deepa:-)