I am a Push Over

I am a push-over
a wren wanted to live in my hair
she is a small bird, so I agreed
there is a nest up there now with four eggs
I cannot shower or bend my head
Restaurants will not let me in
My husband has left me for another woman
Small inconveniences

A monkey asks if he can move into my green backpack
I do not use it in the summer, so I nod my head “yes”.
Because I do not want to sound selfish.
And he asked in a polite way.
He brought his friend, the crocodile, Freddy.
Freddy is lounging across the middle of my bed.
“He does not bite,” the monkey assures me.
My friends do not visit any more but they send me their laundry
Because I am a push-over.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 2:17 PM
A fun whimsical tale! Congratulations on potw win!
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 5:33 PM
Ha!! Ha!! That reads like it used to be here when I had children because one seemed like a crocodile and all three had plenty of laundry for me. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Congratulations on your poem being POTW. Sara K
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October 2, 2025 at 3:32 AM
Thank you Sara
Bartley Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 3:22 PM
Great poem. Congratulations on your POTW! Wow, I love all your poetry. Lol.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 3:32 AM
thank you Benjamin
Seeker Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 3:34 AM
A delightful, humorous write, Caren, in your unmistakable style! Warmest congratulations on POTW
Krutsinger Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 3:32 AM
thank you so much!
Anaya Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Oh I love that a bird's nest lives in your hair and you're aware! A cautionary tale. This reminds of days of the elaborate wigs worn by women in the late 1700's - early 1800's were the taller & bigger the more impressive, one discovered mice! living her hair. Congratulations on your Poem Of The Week Caren! Imagine runs free! xXHugs
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:19 PM
thank you so much- I appreciate it
Rodgers Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Dear Caren, Congrats on POTW that had me grinning the whole way through, playful, witty, and just the right touch of absurd to make its truth hit even harder. Blending humor with heart. Loved it. Autumn Blessings, Caren, Daniel
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:19 PM
thank you Daniel
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September 30, 2025 at 7:50 AM
LOL. Entertaining whimsy Caren. Congratulations! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:20 PM
thank you Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:46 PM
Hope none of this is true but some of the fun is! Hugs and congrats on POTW! What a hoot!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:20 PM
It is pretty accurate
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September 29, 2025 at 4:16 PM
Caren your poem made me laugh, I can imagine the bird nestling in your hair. One good thing you’ll be entertained whilst listening to birdsong all night and day long… Beryl
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:20 PM
I love the name beryl- I bought a piece of beryl once; I guess in a million years it will turn into an enormous emerald
Baker Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 3:52 PM
Thanks for the delightful poem, Caren. Congratulations on your POTW honor, my friend. Enjoy a week of recognition your surely deserve. Write On! Your poet friend of old in Texas, Bill
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September 30, 2025 at 10:21 PM
thank you Bill
Lawless Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:42 AM
the "Pushover Of The Day" well, haven't we all been there at times...nice one Caren...
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September 29, 2025 at 12:49 AM
Congrats to you Caren on the honour of potw Tom
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September 30, 2025 at 10:21 PM
thank you Tom
Nicole Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 4:11 PM
Sometimes, animals are silly. : ) This is cute, clever and so creative. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:21 PM
thank you Brandy
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September 28, 2025 at 3:34 PM
humorous poem--congrats on your POTD designation.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:22 PM
thank you *whee*
Lane Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your poem being potw, Caren. Your creative mind is too often overlooked.
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September 30, 2025 at 10:23 PM
than you my friend Lin
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September 28, 2025 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed day with your win as you go writing away..........
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:22 PM
thank you so much *whee*
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September 28, 2025 at 5:36 AM
Caren, a fun poem, congratulations on POTW.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:22 PM
thank you Tania - one of your contests was the first time I got a number one poem in a contest!
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September 24, 2025 at 9:26 PM
Caren, Wonderful to find your poem dealing with minor inconveniences. And the title "I am a Push Over" says what's needed. -Richard
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September 26, 2025 at 6:12 AM
haha thank you so kindly Richard
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