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I Am A Poem

I am a poem Of scarlet rose I am a song Soft yet bold I am an ocean Warm and cold I am the sky Blue and gold I am a dream Mysterious and untold I am a dream Blue and gold I am the sky Warm and cold I am an ocean Soft yet bold I am a song Of scarlet rose I am a poem

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Dexter Greener

Date: 3/19/2025 10:19:00 AM

This poem has a flow of beauty, well done

Judith Ao

Date: 2/28/2025 7:20:00 AM

Beautiful!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/27/2025 9:28:00 PM

Nice

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/27/2025 11:12:00 AM

Hello Ricky Parise, Wow! is my first word. I enjoyed the whole poem. I am making this poem my fav. Enjoy your day my friend ./Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2025 12:10:00 PM

Hello Rick Parise, thank you for the gratitude. God Bless you. Thank you for the light forl love and light to mine. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Rick Parise
Date: 2/27/2025 11:23:00 AM

Much Gratitude.....thank U Darlene God Bless //// Love and Light to you and yours

Millard Lowe

Date: 2/27/2025 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful, Rick. Love the flow and allegorical messaging. A poet's poem! Thanks for the share. One. Peace and Love.

Rick Parise
Date: 2/27/2025 11:31:00 AM

Thank you so much......you leave a poet inspired with a longing to write again Love and Light

Salmon Oid

Date: 12/18/2024 8:32:00 PM

I like how after "Mysterious and untold" you write the previous verses in the reverse order, as well as the usage of 2 simple words to describe the song, ocean, sky and dream. Such descriptions are also rather fitting when you really think about /have experience with them

Rick Parise
Date: 2/27/2025 11:28:00 AM

Thank you Salmon Old I'm honored and inspired Love and Light Great message !!!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/1/2024 10:10:00 PM

This is absolutely stunning! I love the flow of this and how youv described yourself in such a clever and artistic manner, dear rick, its my first time reading you i suppose and im impressed . Sending you light always

Rick Parise
Date: 2/27/2025 11:26:00 AM

Hi Ink....Thankx for you time to sit and read my lines....Grateful I Am God Bless

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/25/2024 8:43:00 PM

This screams FAVE, FAVE, FAVE! Rick, for me it's perfection. Thank you! ~ Gershon

Rick Parise
Date: 2/27/2025 11:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Gershon...!!! Much Appreciated.....Love & Light