I Am a 4

President Barack Obama
Credited for getting Osama
Now along comes Isis
"Lord help me, another crisis!"


path - 12/1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcqueeney Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:51 PM
There's a lot of good news, it just doesn't sell. There will always be something, if anything they will only escalate. So just take it easy, I'm speaking to myself when I say that too.
Gist Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:24 PM
I must stay neutral on the matter at hand.
Mcqueeney Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:17 PM
yes...it seems the world will have to learn the hard way..good write
Black Blacharczyk Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:30 AM
We haven't learnt the great lesson revenge only brings more revenge. Yes Lord help us all..
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Excellent witty gem.
Rigoler Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Barbara, this is an excellent clerihew – superior to mine on Obama. Congratulations on the win. And thank you for your kind words about "Wild Grape Preserves." It's one of the many poems in my future book on growing up in New England. Best to you in all your endeavors / M
Poteet Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:07 PM
clever and witty and true all in one, humorous; can't beat that. Congratulations.
Gorelick Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:52 PM
Thank you so much.its good to hear from you. Barbara
Arowolo Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Lovely and beautiful piece,Barbara..Congrats on your superb win...
Puddifoot Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 5:23 AM
haha andrea just loves witty little clerihews like this, no surprise to see it a top winner - congrats! :)
Gibson Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations, Barbara; great clerihew win.
Smith Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 11:42 AM
Stopping back with congratulations...hugs Tim
A. Sharma Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Barbara its a great wit n brilliance seen alive! Congrats on big win dear!
Yvonne Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:00 AM
What a huge win for you Barbera. I love this poem. I am going to fav this poem. This the first clerihew that I have knowingly read. I am brand new at poetry.CONGRATULATIONS.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 7:30 AM
So much said in such a few words. Congratulations on your win Barbara.
Gorelick Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Thank you Brenda, good of you to stop by.
Mehta Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:46 AM
Perfectly done clerihew, Barbara, congrats on the win
Gorelick Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Hi Dr Ram..thank you so much. what fun! BG
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:06 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugsJjan xxx
Gorelick Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 7:44 AM
You are always so supportive..thank you!
Foster Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:03 AM
Neatly done, good work, congratulations
Gorelick Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Appreciate your stopping by..thank you! BG
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 1:48 AM
You did about as perfect a clerihew as it can get. Fantastic, and also you chose someone I like as your topic! Congratulations on a top win, number 4.
Poteet Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Osama??
Gorelick Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 7:45 AM
Means a lot to me that I placed in your contest. Thank you. BG
Force Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 12:57 PM
Well dome m'lady...few words big meaning...you maybe a 4..but 7 is the score on this one...enjoy the beautiful Fall weather. thanks for leaving a comment on my Snail poem..
Anish Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 7:54 PM
Succinct description of our leader's task. Not easy leading such a large, diverse society as ours. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:06 AM
Great expressive short poem about our present situation..There shall be wars and rumors and wars, nations shall rise up against nations..The Bible coming to life..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..It is gray kind of day in the south today as well but much cooler and nicer than it has been..Sara
Callus Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Excellent entry for Andrea's contest, Barbara. (still trying to work out if it's 12th January or 1st December!). // paul
Callus Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 5:34 PM
....back again to congratulate you on your podium finish. // paul
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:10 PM
I just grinned and cracked reading this clerihew of yours Barbara! You're such a funny lady! Lol. Loved it, the last line is the best! Cheers! xxxx D.
Gorelick Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Always glad to see you stop by, I have the hardest time writing in this form..glad you liked it.
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:00 PM
love the rhyming scheme and the clever write Barbara:-) hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:35 PM
This is a wonderful clerihew BG...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:58 PM
Ooooh I must check him out I love men who are just turning grey mmmmmm LOL Hugs Jan xxxx
Gorelick Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:53 PM
Thanks Tim, I am not political, but I notice how his hair has turned gray in the last few months.
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