I Am

i am, a son brother uncle a nephew. i am, a writer in poetry form. a undiscovered author. i am, a lover far from a fighther despite those beliefs i fight for. i am, a sinner but i am not the devil. i am, the old soul who speaks within this young boby. i am, my greatest enemy i who know the weak spots. i am, the inspiration that inspires others who inspires others. i am, the the star shining alone. i am, the one you dont regret nor forget. i am, who i am because yesterday struggles did not break me. i am, a artist my stories paint wallet images get the big picture. i am, a dreamer. if i dream too much i'll lose touch with reality. i am, a boy if i can't die a man let me live till i can. i am, Marquis Turner.

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Dana Smith

Date: 10/6/2011 6:56:00 PM

Wow I LOVE this! This is probably my favorite poem all day.. and that's saying a lot because I've read a lot of poetry today.. keep writing.. you have some talent, and appear to be very insightful as well... take care.. feel free to message me when you have some more poetry up.. if not, I'll check up on you later on..

Marquis Turner
Date: 10/6/2011 9:16:00 PM

1st let me thank you for taking the time to read and respond thank you! Im glad you enjoy my poetry also very happy it was one of your favorite of the day!! I'll be sure to inform when I post another. ill check your poetry out too!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/18/2011 3:04:00 PM

Great poem Marquis.... " i am the old sould who speaks within this young body"...luv that line...kudos...this is great

Marquis Turner
Date: 9/18/2011 3:38:00 PM

thank you! I appreciate the feed back. I hope in the future I can keep your interest in my poetry.