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lily of the valley and rose of sharon- the aroma and the flower of life Inspired by S of S 2:1

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/12/2009 11:14:00 AM

love the sweet turn in line 3! jim

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/4/2009 11:52:00 PM

Such a warm picture on this cold Kansas night. I thank you for bringing such beauty to my mind. Many smiles from Lolita

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/4/2009 7:14:00 PM

Congrats, Brian, on your honorable mention win in Let It Snow contest.. I also received an honorable mention and am honored to share the stage with u.. Soup Mail... where are your Definitions Always as HG mentioned to me tonight? Linda-Marie, P.E. P.S. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/4/2009 3:07:00 PM

Beautiful and moving, touching verse, Brian... thankxxx for sharing... Soup Mail... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2009 8:18:00 AM

Awesome cinquain, Brian. You seem to find beauty everywhere and share it with your readers in such an original manner. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 11/4/2009 8:13:00 AM

A beautiful flower, I can smell the aroma, smile. It's amazing what a great visual can do. May your pen never run dry....Thanks for sharing Brian. Love Light Patricia

John Freeman

Date: 11/4/2009 8:06:00 AM

I love this Brian, agreeable so. Sincerely, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/4/2009 7:17:00 AM

I love the peaceful feeling of this poem! (Lily of the Valley.... my birth month flower of May, is special to me!). ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2009 5:38:00 AM

Love this one. Love the Song of Songs or Song of Solomon. Keep writing. Sara

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 11/4/2009 1:04:00 AM

mmm...lovely fowers, can think of the elegant aromas released from within to make such beautiful perfumes... and gentle delicate forms gracing nature itself....lovely penning again...Anna-Marie.