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For the "I Am" poetry contest of Unseeking Seeker. posted 4/21/25, written Easter Day

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Suggested line of inquiry: “As God’s spark ensouling organic form, I am that presence which cannot be named, felt within as a magnetic bliss storm, divine pulsation that cannot be tamed, gentled by His touch, within body framed. I am that which transcends both space and time." I am love and light, causing heart to chime.” By Unseeking Seeker We are God’s children, and precious are we, but we should listen to what He had to say to his disciples, who gave us His words. God told them that He was the way. “I am the way, the truth, and the life,” and not only that, but “the light of the world.” the light that Christ spoke of is so divine we can’t comprehend it . . . it’s infinity-swirled. Can you imagine its pulsating bliss? If you saw it, could you turn away? It’s yours by His grace, and it’s the gift we celebrate each Easter, the chosen remembrance day. If we could see it and touch each gold ray, our hearts would sing poetry, for love would reign. Peace would abide. Envy, hate and greed would vanish – no more would we see their ugly stain. “I am the way, the truth, and the life.” How I would love to feel that radiant light emanating from our Lord – enveloping us all. Oh, how glorious it would be. Oh, what pure delight!

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Date: 4/22/2025 2:51:00 AM
- With hope and love, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/21/2025 9:32:00 PM
Very well written Wish the best in the contest.
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Date: 4/21/2025 8:04:00 PM
Dear sweet andrea What a beautiful poem this is, and youv written one that fits the mood of religiousness at the moment so well! I see you are in an Easter mood. Is Easter your fave time or christmas? Mine is halloween altho im muslim haha I really wanted to write for this contest but its quite popular and is filling up too fast! So i bet i wont be able to writ Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/21/2025 10:54:00 PM
I am not religious so as a child I liked Halloween best and today I like Christmas the best. For a while I was confused what to believe in about God but I want very much to have the passion that Christians feel for Jesus. For me, the grace of Jesus seems the best of all beliefs
Date: 4/21/2025 7:58:00 PM
Beautiful Easter tidings, Andrea - <3
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Date: 4/21/2025 12:54:00 PM
I Am Iron Man. Oops, wrong application. Jesus condemned the religious leaders for their traditions. I wonder what he'd think of Easter, Christmas, Halloween etal?
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/21/2025 1:28:00 PM
Amen!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/21/2025 1:05:00 PM
Love how you focus on one particular aspect of my poem. And with an opinion not taken by most Christian churches

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