I Am

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Feb.21.2024
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~ Placed Tenth~

 

Who am I is a question,
That baffles and confuses me.
Aren’t I a stranger to myself,
When in me angels and demons cohabit,
Dwelling side by side.

Sometimes I am mired in confusion.
Sometimes I feel I am a moth caught fast in the fire,
And about to be burnt, when drawn to light
Mindless of the great peril looming.
Sometimes I feel I am sidelined and ignored,
And left out from the mainstream of life,
Like a book stacked away on a rusty shelf
In a dark corner, never touched or dusted. 

After a wave of rising energy
I fall into a state when I feel so inert and dull.
At times, feel that I am a lifeboat without oars.
But soon I alight on the lighthouse of joy.

As the cycle of seasons keeps changing
The pendulum of my life swings from joy to sorrow
And hope and despair are threaded, 
Into the tapestry of life as warp and woof
Essentially kind and compassionate,
I am moved to tears whenever I see,
An instance of human suffering
And tears of joy well my eyes
When I witness human excellence and pride over it. 

Time has mellowed me, and wisdom has taught me,
To see the inner light shining in me.
Even when dark clouds creep into my night sky
Beneath the façade of my aching torso,
I see a soul eternal and indestructible.
At best, I like to think that I am a child of God,
And I strive to be led by that inner light.

Even when I swim in the doldrum of life,
I pray to release the infinitesimal quantum of energy,
That keeps the fire in me ever-blazing,
To add my lustre even to the stars.
To love and be loved is my credo,
For “even if I speak
 in the language of angels and have no love
I am only a noisy, empty gong”.

There is a spark of heavenly fire in each one of us
Though it may lie dormant in broad daylight
It kindles up, beams, and blazes
In the dark hours of adversity.
So, frolic in the Living water and dance on the cliff
An edifice constructed through years of hard labor
May be destroyed overnight but keep building anyway!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 3/1/2024 5:43:00 PM
??Psalm 56:13 KJVAAE?? [13] For thou hast delivered my soul from death: wilt not thou deliver my feet from falling, that I may walk before God in the light of the living? Love your beautiful poem full of scriptures coming to life , which is written by God's spirit as flowing throughout your words to lead others to know this Love : )
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Date: 2/27/2024 11:56:00 PM
Oh my goodness Valsa. I was able to be on here just for a little while tonight, as I am often not able to be on here at all these days. As I read through your words I was whispering "Gosh" "oh" "oh my goodness" I didn't see my son standing there watching me. He said "I can see you're reading poetry, so I'll just leave you alone for now" :) Well, I sure miss being able to read your beautiful poems. I am so blessed. You captured the essence of the human heart. FAVE! <3
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Date: 2/23/2024 3:12:00 AM
Congrats, Valsa. There is so much honesty in these lines. The confusion and the dilemma were brought out so beautifully. Great writing. God Bless!
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Date: 2/22/2024 11:38:00 PM
Back to congratulate you dear valsa! I loved it
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Date: 2/21/2024 9:13:00 PM
First. Will this even go through?
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Date: 2/21/2024 6:10:00 PM
Oh, dear Valsa, your poem is truly magnificent. It surpasses all expectations and showcases your exceptional talent. From beginning to end, it radiates a remarkable depth of self-reflection and raw emotion, delving into the very essence of our existence amid life's turbulent voyage. The vivid imagery you employ masterfully captures the inner struggles and paradoxes that shape the human condition, where both heavenly beings and malevolent spirits cohabitate within the confines of a single soul. I wish you the utmost success in the contest.
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Date: 2/21/2024 11:46:00 AM
Valsa this is an amazing poem. You have outdone yourself on this one. Its truly wonderful from start to finish. Valsa, Andrea has asked me to contact you. She has been trying to comment on your poems, but Soup isn't letting her contact you in comments or in Soup Mail. Please know that she feels bad that she cant leave comments on your lovely poems. All the best sweet Valsa from Wen
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Date: 2/21/2024 11:33:00 AM
Hey Valsa, your take on 'I am' resonates with a profound sense of introspection and vulnerability, grappling with the existential question of identity amidst the tumultuous journey of life. The imagery you employ vividly captures the inner conflicts and contradictions that define the human experience, where angels and demons coexist within the same soul.... best of luck in the contest... I hope you find the answers to your questions..
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Date: 2/21/2024 9:03:00 AM
Wow, excellent poem Valsa. We all share your feelings as we get matured.
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Date: 2/21/2024 6:01:00 AM
We all are human and have to fight each day with the wrong our humanness wants to do and fight to do what is right. It is not easy when a person wants to do what is right. It is easy to do wrong. I like the use of Biblical lines within the poem. I believe you have the faith. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:02:00 AM
Excellent! You can reveal yourself because you are authentic! Bless you, dear poet!
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Date: 2/21/2024 4:06:00 AM
Ah dear sweet valsa! Your opening lines really stood out for me and the rest just flows so seamlessly! In a way that kept me engaged to read until the end, so heartfelt and sincere are your words woven here in such eloquence. I especially felt the lines “ Time has mellowed me, and wisdom has taught me, To see the inner light shining in me” a state of mind we all need to be in! So many lines hit strong for me and resonated too with me. And i agree theres a spark fire within us all! Powerful! FAV
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