I Tried

Once I fell into a swamp like region They were lying there just like a legion. I said, with a little scream! Who wants a little ice cream? They said, maybe after your extraction.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2010 7:49:00 PM

Congratulations. I am glad this made it into the top ten at least! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/14/2010 7:11:00 AM

Congrats on the 10th place win.

John Freeman

Date: 7/13/2010 9:53:00 PM

Congratulations, Cecil on your num diez. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 7/13/2010 1:36:00 PM

Haha, cool Limerick Cecil. Alligator and Ice-Cream, nice one. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations Cecil on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "To Die For"Limericks. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 4:51:00 AM

Got a good chuckle from the last line, Cecil. Congratulations on your win! There were many wonderfully witty entries. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2010 7:46:00 PM

Good one, Cecil. Well, you are my LAST one for the day. I just have to get myself off here finally. LUv, Andrea

Destiny Orschell

Date: 7/11/2010 9:39:00 PM

Good luck! An amazing way to put it. loves Destiny

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/11/2010 9:30:00 PM

Awesome entry Cecil, good luck, tc Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2010 9:19:00 PM

wow!!! nice poem well a bit scarry still a wonderful read,,....must be for the to "2 die 4 limerick." Good luck,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 8:54:00 PM

Great one Cecil ..good luck in the contest.. with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 8:50:00 PM

A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck