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I 70 West

I 70 West Across the miles unhampered by the scene the majesty of space, the vacant sky, the interstate that long ago appeared as yellow brick that led to places where a girl could have her way, or so it seemed. Past meadow lark and pheasant set to fly, Past waving wheat, or blowing, freezing snow, forever disappeared into nowhere. I seventy, I'd lose you to the day, where eighty-five was norm in sixty flat, in hopes of leaving Toto far behind on plains once filled with vagrant buffalo. The scanned horizon, cold, the winter's day, as empty as the past I'd leave behind, then Colorado climbs from Kansas dunes and I, the dreamer, feel the urge again remembering I never will forget, I see her face again, though miles have put it all behind, then Jimmy Webb reminds me all night long that this yard goes on forever. Tomorrow on channel nine, or seventeen, I'll hear Toto again. © Vee Bdosa the Doylestown Poet

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Date: 1/25/2016 7:56:00 AM
Tnx guys. I drove a Chrysler 300 90 plus many days and nights, one day just west of Topeka, I came across a terrible wreck, a girl was dying on the asphalt. Then they covered her. It turned into one of my short stories, TOUCH ME about a girl and boy having been to WOODSTOCK yeh, that one. The SS title came from one of the songs, who sang it? I slowed my Chrysler 300 down, for a few days...
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Date: 1/24/2016 9:30:00 PM
I traveled many times driving tractor trailer. Bitter in winter. Terrific imagery well done.
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Date: 1/24/2016 3:54:00 PM
Traveled that highway many times, it's pretty desolate out there. I used to wonder what it would have been like before civilization, probably just like you say buffalo and wheat and snow. Love the poem.
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