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Oh hello my love, come near to me, not far,
hear me breath deeply for your sweet loving spirit-
I hunger for your love;
with your long golden hair as it lays on my face,
while we hold each other looking down and not wanting to fall-
we make love,
as the electricity travels fast through our two warm bodies
we create thunder,
a storm of love,
riding the springs of our chamber bed; as we make love, love, love.

did I make you blush? red in the face-
hold me my love and kiss, oh yes kiss my lips
and I shall kiss your soft neck,
and place my lips upon your full bosom,
working my way down to the abdomen,
and to the land of pleasure we go- playing hide and seek
and twister all at one.
Let us make love- I not wanting to fall away too far from you
and you shall never go far from me,
come let us sleep away time together,
let the days go by- while we make time and memory after memory
we shall stay young and fruitful- in memory sweet memory-

.2.25.2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 2:29 PM
THIS WAS ENTHRALLING!!!! JUST SWEET AND PASSIONATE!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Wow!
Pettit Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 11:16 PM
I like this part. I presume ii through vi are continuations of this entry. Now it is on to ii.
Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 9:15 AM
heavenly; you take my breath away, charles with such tender passion!.. huggs
Farmer Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 7:03 AM
Reminds me of lying in bed with my wife.
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