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i swim you ... like a river, wild feral flesh, fiery ... merged my press to your moans and motion clasped in warm rapture minds, mouths, mids ... emotions spin like sugar into cotton candy the Stylistics float, dreamy ... musical hooka smoke that swirls moody tendrils that wrap us, sexy ... smooth i surge to your source touch and taste and twist and tickle timing all with prurient precision to free your flood your legs about me, demanding nails burning sensual glyphs on my back you kiss my tongue like sweet, tender fruit then devour ... it, me, my sanity ... my selves, desires "murder me," i whisper, moving deep ... forceful "please" ... begging for my will is no longer ... my own. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Completely New (2) Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 7/1/2020 8:44:00 AM
Mysterious words wrapped around tendrils of emotions in an orchard of love! That's how your muse weaves magic and music Greg. Loved to read this. :) Congratulations on your splendid win!
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Date: 6/30/2020 10:58:00 PM
Sensuous, sexy, smooth, and smoky. All of the above. Congrats on a write in a style that nobody does better than you. Well done, friend ~ John
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Date: 6/30/2020 7:27:00 AM
Wow sir, Fantastic sensual write.:-) Enjoyed it.Congratulations for your top win like always.Keep inspiring us. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
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Date: 6/29/2020 8:20:00 PM
I am truly glad to have read this, my friend Gregory, romantically beautiful and well-executed, my compliments indeed for your 1st Place win, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 6/29/2020 4:32:00 PM
Ok G, what a way to out, posting this last poem I think will get a lot of views and comments from the ladies no doubt.
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:59:00 AM
beautiful poem penned.......delightful toread
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