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I 2 U

i swim you ...
like a river, wild
feral flesh, fiery ... merged
my press to your moans and motion
clasped in warm rapture
minds, mouths, mids ...
emotions spin
like sugar into cotton candy
the Stylistics float, dreamy ...
musical hooka smoke that swirls
moody tendrils that wrap us, sexy ... smooth
i surge to your source
touch and taste and twist and tickle
timing all with prurient precision
to free your flood
your legs about me, demanding
nails burning sensual glyphs on my back
you kiss my tongue like sweet, tender fruit
then devour ...
it, me, my sanity ... my selves, desires
"murder me," i whisper, moving deep ... forceful
"please" ... begging
for my will is no longer ...
my own.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Strand Completely New (2) Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
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Mishra Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Mysterious words wrapped around tendrils of emotions in an orchard of love! That's how your muse weaves magic and music Greg. Loved to read this. :) Congratulations on your splendid win!
Watt Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Sensuous, sexy, smooth, and smoky. All of the above. Congrats on a write in a style that nobody does better than you. Well done, friend ~ John
Deepa Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 7:27 AM
Wow sir, Fantastic sensual write.:-) Enjoyed it.Congratulations for your top win like always.Keep inspiring us. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:20 PM
I am truly glad to have read this, my friend Gregory, romantically beautiful and well-executed, my compliments indeed for your 1st Place win, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Ok G, what a way to out, posting this last poem I think will get a lot of views and comments from the ladies no doubt.
Bangalee Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 5:59 AM
beautiful poem penned.......delightful toread
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