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A form of poetry I created. A progressive syllable count 1-6 then back down to 5 to1. I have awakened my muse...I

I I write I think thoughts I close my eyes I imagine things I create poetry I open my eyes I see my thoughts I myself I see I

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/19/2021 7:05:00 PM

Hello charles ... you have certainly invented an interesting way of writing a verse. I hope to read more of these - thanks charles - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/17/2021 9:51:00 AM

We must think of I, even the bible says you body is Gods temple , take care of it. I love this poem and have faved it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/17/2021 9:54:00 AM

Hi Charles, thank you so much for a fun contest and for the top win you awarded me, I feel very proud that a well know author likes my Labradoodles Poem! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/17/2021 6:21:00 AM

I like, it’s what I hope we all do before we defy to do anything

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/13/2021 10:45:00 AM

Hello Charles Messina, I do think that it is clever. enjoy your day my friend.