I-10

I-10 sings its lone soliloquy Along the desert stream That flows on 18 wheelers Flying to another world Beyond this intersected boundary I-10 sings its lone soliloquy On wings that croon and woo Each lonesome passerby Heading for another world Beyond this intersected boundary

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 7:18:00 PM

Ruben,, a fantastic poem,, i wonder how far i would have to travel.. or have traveled... boundaries broken,,,, this is an enjoyable thought of words.. Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

Ruben Ramos
Date: 11/15/2011 5:03:00 AM

Linda, I grew up before the freeways were built in my hometown. I-10 was right outside my front door and in the busiest intersection. So many people travelling gave me a wandering spirit. Thanks.