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I-Phones

I-phones have changed our paradigms People no longer Have to talk to each other Or Need to form relationships with human beings. Evolving into an electronic virtual culture, Suddenly we live in a surreal, imitation world, and we are avatars, not humans.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/25/2018 9:44:00 PM
Do we really exist or is this some glitch in the Holodeck program? Oh well, another "fav".
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/26/2018 12:07:00 AM
Thank you M.L. I cannot get over the fact that phones have replaced conversations and people.
Date: 10/25/2018 11:45:00 AM
This is a very weird phenomena to me... I am resisting the technology as long as possible! ;P
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/26/2018 6:42:00 AM
That is one of the things I love about you! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2018 4:51:00 PM
I have it, I use it, but I know when to do "real people" instead.
Date: 10/25/2018 5:51:00 AM
Interesting and beautiful Acrostic
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2018 6:08:00 AM
I feel like an avatar some days; like I am not really here at all any more.
Date: 10/25/2018 12:35:00 AM
That is exactly what and where we are headed for. I lol with this poem because i keep saying similar to my husband. Well done Caren. xoxo, Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2018 1:23:00 AM
I wanted to write an acrostic about I-phones because I noticed today in a meeting where we were asked not to use them, pick them up, glance at them under the table, etc, about half the people kept theirs on the table anyway.

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