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I, Me and We

When I and me become we and times threaten reverse. When we stay the course in opposition to today's prevail of the self serving I with no remorse. We can raise the standard and then the cup on high for we have thwarted the arrogant I. Having done so we are rewarded with a depth of understanding and the wonder of a greater WE.

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Date: 6/12/2013 9:49:00 PM
this is nicely done Terry ;} thank you for reading " Missing Pieces"
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/14/2013 4:18:00 AM
Thanks Deb, It's been a while since anyone has read this poem. I had almost forgotten it. Tlee.
Date: 5/18/2012 10:46:00 AM
love the imagery here Terry. harry
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/18/2012 4:20:00 PM
Ello Arry so kind of you to stop by. So glad that you like this piece since it was the reading of one of your poems that gave me the idea except that I can't remember which one it was. Thanks Love TLee
Date: 5/16/2012 6:33:00 AM
Victory of WE over I.Nicely expressed feelings of your mind here Terry.Enjoyed.
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/16/2012 7:33:00 AM
Thanks my young Friend. May life remove all the bumps from your road. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/16/2012 1:45:00 AM
Terry, cool words, very well expressed...David
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/16/2012 3:00:00 AM
Thanks David. I have been experimenting with different ways to say things that I think and feel. Huggs TLee

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