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Hush of Night

Moon hides behind clouds starlight dance beckons to me -- quiet hush of night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/11/2009 9:02:00 PM
You captured a wonderful moment on paper, great thought nicely penned...Raul
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Date: 3/11/2009 8:27:00 AM
Great imagery, Amy! When I'm at sea fishing 25 miles offshore overnight, I can even see the Milky Way. Thanks for the inspiration to remember the wonderous feeling the stars provide. And thanks for your comments on "Playing Santa to Wall Street." It was obviously born of angst. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2009 1:26:00 AM
Lke the haiku moment in L3. Amy Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/10/2009 3:56:00 PM
This is so beautiful amy, so much imagery for so few words. Beautifully penned. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 3/9/2009 7:47:00 PM
I had wanted to tell you that it was 3 days after Mother's day (May 15) for me. A sad coincidence for us both. Thank you again for your caring words, Amy. Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:05:00 PM
This is so lovely, Amy! Such brilliant imagery. I am sorry that you had to face that loss. It is tough. I have a daughter too. She is 22 now but she was 15 when it happened and a comfort to me. Thank you for sharing and God bless you always. Love, Robin
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Date: 3/6/2009 4:20:00 PM
Well done..a beautiful picture painted..BG
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Date: 3/6/2009 2:00:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Amy. No loss for words here in this wonderful piece of poetry! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/6/2009 10:00:00 AM
I sense the silence amidst the magnificent imagery. Very beautiful! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/6/2009 8:20:00 AM
Nice one Amy....you are great with the haiku!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:28:00 AM
very well written... an excellent haiku! beautiful images the quiet hush of night so lovely... you breath such beauty when you write!! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:19:00 AM
The scene has me smiling. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:55:00 AM
I love the second line in this write...so well done.
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:38:00 AM
This is so lovely in form and visual clarity. Very well written. Michael
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