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Hurt Can'T Be Kept

You’ve come from cold Hushed words not told Don’t say those things The shame it brings Don’t be so bold Just let it mold Deep in your soul You dig a hole Hide all your fear No tears my dear Wear your good cheer No one will hear You cry at night When out of sight You’re hard as steel Your heart can’t feel In light of day No one can say That you are weak Your tears won’t leak That day you find One who is kind Who feels your cry In your mere sigh A word of love Soft as a dove Safe in his arms Steeled from all harms Out pours the pain Hard as spring rain Tears must be wept Hurt can’t be kept ________________________ January 31, 2018 Written for: 128 Word Contest Sponsor: Silent One [Checked in www.howmanysyllables.com]

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Date: 5/22/2018 3:12:00 PM
When I can't seem to find a poem to comment to, I go to one's best poems list. This is Number Two on your list, and I'd say it is worthy of that!!
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Date: 2/28/2018 6:31:00 PM
Hello Judith,sometimes it is hard to hold back the tears,I know, I have tried not easy to do. Cry at night sometimes. have a nice evening my friend.
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Judith S
Date: 3/3/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind comments Darlene. I'm sorry for what brings you to tears in your life :( We all feel this at times ... some have more pain than others. <3 ~Judy
Date: 2/27/2018 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful! Simply beautiful poetic expressions from the soul, Judith. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Freddie ... for your visit and you generous comments. Coming from an amazing poet such as yourself ... this means alot. Thank you!!! <3 ~Judy
Date: 2/18/2018 4:42:00 PM
In a mere sigh is what I meant to say...not cry. Excuse mistake. bbn
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Date: 2/18/2018 4:41:00 PM
"Who feels your cry..in a mere cry" . How sensitive you created this loving hero. Grad I met you...great! p.s. Congrats!bbn
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Date: 2/20/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, dear Barbara, for you very lovely comments on my poem. I so appreciate you reading. ~ Judy
Date: 2/15/2018 10:33:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Judy - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/20/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for your congrats on this one Greg!! (I've gotten a bit behind in commenting :) Appreciate your visits always!! ~Judy
Date: 2/8/2018 11:42:00 AM
He Said "If You Give Your Pain To Me, I Will Renew Your Identity"....just from those words alone....my sins were atoned....giving me Strength without fear....and the courage to shed a tear....when i was younger i kept all things inside....i was a victim of my own pride....causing a chaotic internal fight....until the day God Touched me With His Light....very powerful and inspiring piece judith....;)
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Date: 2/9/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for your amazing comments Eric. You are quite gifted in verse :) ~Judy
Date: 2/7/2018 9:11:00 PM
Hey, coming back with Big Congrats. Where is your entry for his latest Six word lines!?
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Date: 2/9/2018 3:48:00 PM
THANK you Andrea my friend :) My 6 word entry is in now!! I saw you got yours in quickly!!! Best, Judy
Date: 2/6/2018 10:42:00 AM
Poignant eloquent penning Judith. Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 2/9/2018 3:48:00 PM
Thank you xomo :) Appreciate your kind comments and visit ~Judy
Date: 2/6/2018 4:31:00 AM
Nicely written, Judy, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 2/9/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thanks so much John for your comment! ~Judy
Date: 2/5/2018 6:16:00 PM
That's a strong poem, awesome what you did with the form, Judith. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/5/2018 10:44:00 AM
Great write Judith, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/9/2018 3:36:00 PM
Thank you Eve :) ~Judy
Date: 2/5/2018 10:25:00 AM
A soulful poem Judith, full of truth and emotion, congrats a worthy shared win!
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Date: 2/9/2018 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so much John Hamilton :) ~ Judy
Date: 2/5/2018 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Judith, sad and emotional so well written. :))
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Roy for your kind comments :) ~Judy
Date: 2/4/2018 8:22:00 PM
Wonderful rhythm and rhymes moved me with ease through the lovely poetic lines of your sadly beautiful poem, Judy. Congratulations on your excellent first place win. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much my NE friend! Your comments always make my day :) Best, Judy
Date: 2/4/2018 7:33:00 PM
So beautifully written, Judith, with such a soothing and uplifting message for a broken heart. Congratulations on your 1st Place win in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra :)
Date: 2/4/2018 5:29:00 PM
Excellent. Congratulations for your win Judith :)
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!!
Date: 2/4/2018 5:06:00 PM
Wow, Judith. An awesome winner. Congrats!
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:23:00 AM
Thanks so much Line!!
Date: 2/4/2018 4:30:00 PM
..out pours the pain, hard as Spring rain! Congratulations, Judith!
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 2/4/2018 3:10:00 PM
Deep poem full of sadness, like Emile's poem it is full of emotion.. Everyone needs someone to hold after a hard day... Espeically when it is cold.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest Judy..
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent One!!! I truly appreciate the honor to have a place amongst these other amazing poets!!! ~Judy
Date: 2/2/2018 10:10:00 AM
I like this poem for one reason onlyBecause it rhymes   Call it what you will prose or what ever  I haven't a clue what is what but this is the way I write poetry it rhymes and I feel that is the way poems are supposed to be made if they don't rhyme  It's so deep I don't get it but but i'm  not an expert im an amateur
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Date: 2/2/2018 1:29:00 PM
Thank you Marc for your nice comments! ~ Judy
Date: 2/2/2018 9:03:00 AM
I agree wholeheartedly:) Amazing entry in limited words, Judith, a sure winner:)
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Date: 2/2/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Jo!! Appreciate your kind comments ;) ~Judy
Date: 2/1/2018 1:36:00 PM
What a fantastic entry, Judy, Great job, I love the title too xxoo Good Luck
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Date: 2/2/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Mike!! ~Judy
Date: 2/1/2018 4:44:00 AM
- Pain is hard to hide, it can be read in our eyes - Even though our mouth is smiling - A great poem, Judy :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2018 1:26:00 PM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise for your sweet comments:) ~Judy
Date: 1/31/2018 7:58:00 PM
WoW! Judy, You did amazing with the contest theme. The content was good and everything made sense. Nothing was forced, it looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Judith S
Date: 2/2/2018 1:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis. I appreciate your comments and vote of confidence :) ~Judy
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