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Hurt

Hurt Hurt comes in so many forms Losing bruising two souls unwind Nothing stays still over time Some say harden up and stand tall I say soften up is less of a fall We can only control taught and action Outside of that is just reaction Living humble is less of a stumble No one can know what is going to be Hurt will always be part of reality

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/28/2017 3:12:00 PM
Hurt and pain ..We all pass through that...but as you say so well in your poem..Sometimes we have to soften up ..We have to forgive...and move on.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/28/2017 3:47:00 PM
Hi Charmaine , so true , I will be a nifty fifty next month in my super ego stage in life ,,,lol if I get any softer I will turn to jelly :)))) Hugs
Date: 4/27/2017 5:11:00 PM
Resonates with modern society, few rise to the challenge of hurt anymore! Great thought put to poem Niall. Regards, Craig
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/27/2017 5:53:00 PM
Hi Craig, thank you for comment and so true :))
Date: 4/21/2017 11:46:00 PM
I really liked this one, it connects to my DESIRE poem that you read. You desire something too much. You hurt the other person :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/22/2017 4:57:00 AM
Hi Debbie, so true thanks for comment:))) hugs from Ireland
Date: 4/10/2017 6:43:00 PM
Indeed, to 'soften up' can stop the hurt. Good advice my friend. GBU
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/11/2017 1:51:00 AM
Hi Curtis, Thanks for the comment

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