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Hunted-- For Crown of Sonnets

We still face the test of absolute truth As creatures of the wild roam on a vast field The sun burning through their earthy pursuit Within this mind, a darkened haze concealed. I watch their shadows, deepening a leer My fingers grip waiting for the light of dawn While mossy scent pervades on woods’ frontier, Restraining a planned scheme as moon grows long. Daylight wakes and I seek the open trail Across the range, a moose nibbles on weeds It’s curve -like silhouette fine like handrail Now, desire for prey claims a game sullied. Then noises ring, and noises ring again Deafening the echo of silent glen. ............................ Seven Stones in the Crown & other Gems Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/15/2014 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine with beautiful sonnet, nette
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:13:00 AM
Nette, , Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/8/2014 8:41:00 AM
so very beautifully crafted piece dear friend
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Date: 2/6/2014 5:09:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work for the crown sonnet..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/6/2014 4:04:00 PM
truly a beautiful poem,, so visual, just love this...
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Date: 2/6/2014 10:12:00 AM
Today I read some very good nature poems and yours is among the best. It's such a pleasant read,, and then the ' the hunt'!,, still a pleasant read... A well written sonnet, nette! Winning wishes... and love
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Date: 2/6/2014 8:53:00 AM
wow, love this, Nette
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Date: 2/6/2014 4:33:00 AM
- Beautifully poem, Nette !!! - Thank you for loving words on my post: "NOT A POEM - SOME EAT THE PLEASURE" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:23:00 PM
This is a immensely wondrous write my friend! All of nature is a wonder, and hunting is not my forte! I do enjoy the natural instincts you have within your poem! A fascinating piece Nette, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/5/2014 6:21:00 PM
Silence can indeed be deafening. This is another beautiful piece from you. I am running out of descripters to describe how good you are.
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Date: 2/5/2014 3:13:00 PM
Beautifully put together and a delight to read . I apologise for my silly poem , Since removed.
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Date: 2/5/2014 3:09:00 PM
I am at the brink of suspense not knowing what lies in here. A scene, deer, someone who seems to target a prey..Then, the noise. Your images pulsates, Nette. I missed your contest, flew too fast. Till next!
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