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Oh my goodness, what humans are willing to bare to attract... Beyond, the mock and mocking bareness lies the convoluted angst of man, pleasure seeking, in a self gratifying wallow of excretions. The need to roll…down the road…in the hay to move like corpuscles down the multitudinous arties of man. Some draped in fuchsia, an orchid’s blush with legs so long they make an ass of themselves. Others tricked out in comfy cotton boostieas breasts jiggling like jello, mounds of molded eye candy firm, run-ready calves, taunt and on point strut ready to rut on stiletto heels still primed for and pandering to the sought after alpha male. The androgyny of the 21st century male-dom making marking the target frustratingly diff I cult these drooping, wilted, round shouldered bow-legged, net walkers seem unlikely sperm donors for the next generation beyond the pale. And as their lives settle in to settle down in the whirlwinds of climate change oil shortages, constant alpha stripping further neuters the human potential as the haves, feed the have nots into the furnaces of endless war the heard is culled………

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Date: 7/10/2011 8:57:00 AM
After that, "Juliets plea", I had to read another one of your writes, and I'm def. happy that I did so ! You have a remarkable approach with sharing the art. It's always a pleasure my friend to read your thoughts ! Until later mine fellow ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/9/2011 5:11:00 PM
I don't agree with all the sentiments of this great piece.....but it is masterpiece of sublime inspiration. The pleasure seeking of mankind towards the opposite sex is wholesome I think. However, as you indicate, the need to dominate and destroy is a pitiful outcome of distorted minds.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/9/2011 5:55:00 PM
it is the cult of "I" which destroys Marxists and Confusionist put the health of the group over the individual and capitalizm/democracy puts the needs of the indivdual above the group...which actually leads to the rot of the individual in self seeking self searching self-destroying behavior...to bad there doesn't seem to be a middle ground? Closest I have seen is in Denmark.
Date: 7/9/2011 5:50:00 AM
What a wonderful poem to read on an early Saturday morning Debbie. Another Fave to me. Hope you are enjoying your weekend and that your are finding much inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2011 11:03:00 PM
Now you seem like my kinda Gal....oh i mean person..Debbie, (i mean both actually) just a sop to the fantasists:)anyway the piece i have tried to sort out from laptop, is a voice crying out in the wilderness, as you may have gathered your above potent piece of (truth full) observation hit the spot..!
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Date: 7/8/2011 4:58:00 PM
The words just flowed out(I've been following you today, WAR PATH WOMEN) LOL~ Verse it is ~ But......did you find the beauty????,-) I do appreciate your poetry,always so free.....great write..IMAGERY PLUS!!!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/8/2011 5:54:00 PM
did I find the beauty? hmmm...I guess I saw the tawdry, the total mis interpetation of beauty...hmmm a wee bit of beauty in a young sweet kind generous young man's eyes yes! BUt most of the girls were what my my would call floosies?
Date: 7/8/2011 4:51:00 PM
Such amazing poetry Debbie... great word usage....very enjoyed my dear... and thanks for the tip in "Poetry" "Only" looked much better....luv Michael
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Date: 7/8/2011 2:44:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned..Sara
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