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August 14, 2025, entered in Jamie Patterson's Seed of Fear contest 

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Long years ago, you heard I fell,
just tumbled from a wall and—SPLAT!
I’d not be whole again, all said.
I’m here to follow up on that.

The King’s men scraped my pieces up.
It seemed they’d better things to do
than put me back together right.
I think they used Gorilla Glue.*

Now here I am, a messed-up sight,
a monster much like Frankenstein.
My body parts are all askew.
Not even my eyeballs align.

I'm feared, avoided, ridiculed.
I've no place in society.
Made a pariah by my looks,
though not in prison, I'm not free.

I hoped corrective surgeries
would fix me; so I filed a claim.
It was denied. It seems that for
my brokenness, I was to blame. 

Here's what the agent said. I quote:
"Foolhardy eggs that perch on walls
should know that someday they'll get hurt.
They've asked for whatever befalls."


*popular product advertised as “the
toughest adhesive on the planet”

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Date: 8/20/2024 1:51:00 PM
Creative lines in this winning contest entry. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 8/18/2024 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute/creative Nursery Rhyme write. Now add glued up for a second life. Hooray!!!  Have a blessed day/week.....................
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Date: 8/15/2024 5:56:00 PM
Clever write! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/6/2024 10:52:00 AM
Very clever, love how you did this. I think he still looks sweet even with his lopsided smile and I am glad he is back too. Good for the children to know he is ok as well. He looks happy to me lol. Emilia : )
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/6/2024 1:24:00 PM
Emelia, thanks a million for this wonderful response to my poem! Janice
Date: 7/29/2024 3:11:00 PM
This really "cracked" me up Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2024 5:08:00 PM
LOL! Thanks so much, Tom! Janice

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