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Hummingbirds Wing...

When realities fall harshly upon unbroken tasks... Love whispers sparsely spoken through masks... When I need to get away from the everyday thing, I find refuge underneath a hummingbirds wing.... Momentarily disappearing within the fantasy of flight, wrapped in bright plummage moving faster than light... Invisible vibrations abnormal to sight, my refuge thing with a hummingbirds wing...

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Sue Mason

Date: 9/19/2009 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful write here, Jay. Been a very long time since you have posted here at PoetrySoup!! Hope you return soon with more of your wonderful writing.

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 4/15/2009 6:03:00 PM

Oh wow Jay, I got a partial visual on this! :) this is filled with beautiful, serene thoughts. Very nice. I love the imagery because the hummingbird, such a delicate, amazing creature, and to be under the wings thereof must be a wondrous feeling my friend. Smile, as many thoughts fill me, I have found serenity in knowing that I am whom God intended me to be though self improvment, I will strive for always... just lovin' life! my best to you always dear one, Lucinda

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/2/2009 12:26:00 PM

Hi Jay it has been awhile - I do hope 2009 has blessed you so far - Loved your poem I also find great comfort and peace in the amazing hummingbirds that come to eat off my feeders - God Bless you Jay, MJ

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/2/2009 10:18:00 AM

Love the way you can find refuge from life's harshness "underneath a hummingbird's wing." Great poem, Jay!